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I woke up knowing it was the most important day of my life.

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I woke up knowing it was the most important day of my life. That day was a turning point of my life because my flight was in the evening and I flew over to overseas to study. Earlier that I never visited to any foreign countries and I never stayed separately with my parents. Moreover, I had a lot of challenges that I will have language barrier, culture difference and my family can’t support me financially so much. I had to earn for my survival and my school fee by working part-time. I joined a private college and didn’t legally allow to work outside. Despite packing all my things details, I am imaging in various ways and fascinated. I need to manage time to do cooking by myself, washing, cleaning, studying and working. So, that day was considered as an unforgettable and memorable day.
I woke up knowing it was the most
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important
day of my life. That day was a turning point of my life
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because
my flight was in the evening and I flew over to overseas to study. Earlier that I never visited to any foreign countries and I never stayed
separately
with my parents.
Moreover
, I had
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a lot of
challenges that I will have language barrier, culture difference and my family can’t support me
financially
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so
much. I had to earn for my survival and my school fee by working part-time. I
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joined
a private college and didn’t
legally
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allow
to work outside. Despite packing all my things
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details
, I am imaging in various ways and fascinated. I need to manage time to
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do cooking
by myself, washing, cleaning, studying and working.
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So
, that day
was considered
as an unforgettable and memorable day.
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IELTS essay I woke up knowing it was the most important day of my life.

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  American English
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