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Question- In some countries people are required to learn a foreign language, but in some it is not necessary to do so. Discuss boyh view and give your opinion?

Question- In some countries people are required to learn a foreign language, but in some it is not necessary to do so. Discuss boyh view and give your opinion? NyEdN
Foreign language is widely debated issue, with many individuals claiming that in some nations are required to learn foreign linguistics. However, opponent claimed that it is not required to do so. This essay will intends to analysis both the prospective including my opinion. To commence with, there are number of arguments in favour of former viewpoint. The most prominent one is it develops the nation. Broadly speaking in multinational companies the foreign language is compulsory for dealing as to build better communication. As a result, it enhances communication skills. Inspite of the this students go to abroad for further studies then they have to familiar with their native language to reduce the stress of communication. To exemplify, now a days most of learners go to abroad not only for further studies but also for know better about their culture. Hence, this will also increase their academic skills. Therefore, it might seem appropriate to side with this stance. Nonetheless, much of the criticism against this stem from believe that abolishment of their own identity as many thinks that if the try to learn nu languages than their native linguistic will less spoken so that after some years the language will be extinct. For instance, in China there is only language is used that is Chinese. Thus, it will save the heritage of their language. It is undeniable that many masses reckon that it is not compulsory to learn the language to get familiar with foreign culture but the another method are also available such as history and geography books are also available to learn the language. Hence it can be understand why there is a strong opposition which favour on the side of this stance. Having considered both sides of arguments, it seems to be much more convencing that the former viewpoint has more weightage as it will increase the level of knowledge and skills.
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individuals claiming that in
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are required
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foreign
linguistics.
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. This essay will intends to analysis both the prospective including my opinion.

To commence with, there are number of arguments in
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favour
of former viewpoint. The most prominent one is it develops the nation.
Broadly
speaking in multinational
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companies
the
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foreign
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language
is compulsory for dealing as to build better communication.
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, it enhances communication
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skills
.
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of
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the this
students
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go to abroad
for
further
studies then they
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language
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reduce
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stress
of communication. To exemplify,
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now a days
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most of learners
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skills
.
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, it might seem appropriate to side with this stance.

Nonetheless, much of the criticism against this stem from believe that abolishment of their
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own
identity as
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thinks
that if the try to
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nu
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languages
than their native linguistic will less spoken
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so
that after
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some
years the
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will be extinct.
For instance
, in China there is
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only
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language
is
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used
that is
Chinese.

Thus
, it will save the heritage of their
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language
. It is undeniable that
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many
masses reckon that it is not compulsory to
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learn
the
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language
to
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get
familiar with
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foreign
culture
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but
the another method are
also
available such as history and geography books are
also
available to
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learn
the
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language
.
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Hence
it can be
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understand
why there is a strong opposition which
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favour
on the side of this stance.

Having considered both sides of arguments, it seems to be much more
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convencing
that the former viewpoint has more weightage as it will increase the level of knowledge and
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skills
.
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IELTS essay Question- In some countries people are required to learn a foreign language, but in some it is not necessary to do so. Discuss boyh view and give your opinion?

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