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I really really really love roblox so I write it

I really really really love roblox so I write it 95bLx

I really like Roblox. I joined in March of 2018 from my brother named Tom. He introduced Roblox when I was watching Minecraft, and he showed my some tycoon games and simulation games. My very first account on the site is called diskpartiton. My very first game played was Mining Simulator. Then my brother showed another game on Roblox named Jailbreak. I really like it! One day, I saw a guy named "thekingonearth" and then created the THEWATERONEARTH account. I knew a lot of games on that account, such as Adopt Me, Theme Park Tycoon 2, . . . One day, I wanted to change my name, but it costed 1000 robux, so that's why WilliamBlueShirts is born! I knew even more games, such as: Epic Minigames. Lab Experiment, Flood Escape, . . . Anyways, I really like Roblox. Thank you.

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