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I had a good opportunity to learn English in 4 grade but for a very stupid reason I missed it

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I had a good opportunity to learn English in 4 grade but for a very stupid reason I missed it. When I was in high school, I decided to take the English exam, so I decided to study again. I signed up for an online course, printed the questions and did the exercises. Self-study is really tiring and stressful. The grammar part was not sure at first, plus learning vocabulary took a lot of time. Many times I wanted to throw away all the documents which I printed, I wanted to lie down to sleep. But then I had to get up because I was still studying for the exam. Finally, the exam passed. Now that I enter university, I realize the importance of English for my future. Now learning English is not for the exam but to create opportunities for myself, even though it's difficult, i have to try and persevere.
I had a
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good
opportunity to learn English in 4 grade
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but
for a
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very
stupid reason I missed it. When I was in high school, I decided to take the English exam,
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so
I decided to study again. I signed up for an online course, printed the questions and did the exercises. Self-study is
really
tiring and stressful. The grammar part was not sure at
first
, plus learning vocabulary took
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a lot of
time.
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Many
times I wanted to throw away all the documents which I printed, I wanted to lie down to sleep.
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But
then I had to
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get
up
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because
I was
still
studying for the exam.
Finally
, the exam passed.
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Now
that I enter university, I realize the importance of English for my future.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
learning English is not for the exam
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but
to create opportunities for myself,
even though
it's difficult,
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i
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have to
"Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.
try and
persevere.

IELTS essay I had a good opportunity to learn English in 4 grade but for a very stupid reason I missed it

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152 words
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