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humans have had negative impact on the enviroment. Do you agree or disagree? support your response with detail examples

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ONE OUT OF TEN CHILDREN BIRTHED PER YEAR IS DIAGNOSED OF LUNG DISEASE AS A RESULT OF EXCESS INHALATION OF SMOKE. INDUSTRIAL EMISSION SUCH AS SMOKE AND WASTE WATER ARE CHANNELED TO THE ENVIRONMENT CAUSING BOTH AIR AND WATER POLLUTION. I STRONGLY AGREE THAT HUMAN ACTIONS HAVE GRAVELY AFFECTED OUR PLANET AND THIS ESSAY WILL DEMONSTRATE THE CLAIMS OF HOW THE PLANET HAS BEEN POLLUTED OVER TIME. FIRSTLY, THE OCEANS ARE BEING POLLUTED WITH FOSSIL FUEL CAUSED BY OIL SPILLS ON DAILY BASIS. THESE FOSSIL FUELS RESTRICTS THE OXYGEN FLOW NEEDED BY THE MAFRINE CREATURES AND INTURN CAUSES THE DEATH OF THE ANIMALS. ALSO, SINGLE USE PLASTICS ARE THROWN INTO THE OCEANS AND THEY ACCUMULATE. THIS ACCUMULATION CAN BE DISASTROUS OVER TIME AS IT IS NON DEGRADABLE. NOT ONLY IS IT NON DEGRADABLE BUT CAN ALSO BOTTLE UP THE BABY CREATURES PUTTING AN END TO GROWTH AND SUCCESSION. FURTHERMORE, AIR POLLUTANTS SUCH AS SMOKES ARE ALSO VERY HARMFUL TO THE ENVIROMENT. INDUSTRIAL WASTE CONTRIBUTE A GREAT DEAL TO AIR POLLUTION BY RELEASING SMOKES INTO THE ATMOSPHERE WHICH GRADUALLY DEPLETES THE OZONE LAYER THERE BY CAUSING A GREENHOUSE EFFECT ON THE PLANET. INHALATION OF THIS SMOKE CAN ALSO LEAD TO SEVERAL LUNG DISEASES WHICH COULD SHORTEN LIVES. AND NOT ONLY THAT, IT COULD ALSO CAUSE THE BIRTHING OF LOW WEIGHT BABIES. CONCLUSIVELY, HUMAN ACTIVITIES HAS GREATLY CAUSED THE AIR AND WATER QUALITY OF OUR EARTH TO DETERIORATE DRASTICALLY. MEASURES NEEDS TO BE PUT IN PLACE TO REDUCE THESE ENVIROMENTAL POLLUTANTS SO AS TO MAKE THE WORLD A SAFER PLACE TO LIVE.

ONE OUT OF TEN CHILDREN BIRTHED PER YEAR IS DIAGNOSED
 OF LUNG DISEASE AS A RESULT
 OF EXCESS INHALATION OF You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhaustmistgasfogsootsmog
SMOKE
. INDUSTRIAL EMISSION SUCH AS You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhaustmistgasfogsootsmog
SMOKE
 AND WASTE WATER ARE CHANNELED
 TO THE ENVIRONMENT CAUSING BOTH You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
AIR
 AND WATER POLLUTION. I STRONGLY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
AGREE
 THAT HUMAN ACTIONS HAVE GRAVELY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
AFFECTED
 OUR PLANET AND THIS ESSAY WILL DEMONSTRATE THE CLAIMS OF HOW THE PLANET HAS BEEN POLLUTED
 OVER TIME.

FIRSTLY
, THE OCEANS ARE BEING POLLUTED
 WITH FOSSIL FUEL CAUSED BY OIL SPILLS ON DAILY BASIS. THESE FOSSIL FUELS RESTRICTS THE OXYGEN FLOW NEEDED BY THE Possible spelling mistake found.MarineMaurine
MAFRINE
 CREATURES AND Possible spelling mistake found.InternINT URN
INTURN
 CAUSES THE DEATH OF THE ANIMALS. ALSO
, SINGLE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
USE
 PLASTICS ARE THROWN
 INTO THE OCEANS AND THEY ACCUMULATE. THIS ACCUMULATION CAN BE DISASTROUS OVER TIME AS IT IS It appears that a hyphen is missing.NON-DEGRADABLE
NON DEGRADABLE
. NOT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
ONLY
 IS IT It appears that a hyphen is missing.NON-DEGRADABLE
NON DEGRADABLE
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
BUT
 CAN ALSO
 BOTTLE UP THE BABY CREATURES PUTTING AN This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
END
 TO GROWTH AND SUCCESSION.

FURTHERMORE
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
AIR
 POLLUTANTS SUCH AS You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhaustmistgasfogsootsmog
SMOKES
 ARE ALSO
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
VERY
 HARMFUL TO THE Possible spelling mistake found.Environment
ENVIROMENT
. INDUSTRIAL WASTE CONTRIBUTE A GREAT DEAL TO You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
AIR
 POLLUTION BY RELEASING You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhaustmistgasfogsootsmog
SMOKES
 INTO THE ATMOSPHERE WHICH GRADUALLY
 DEPLETES THE OZONE LAYER THERE BY CAUSING A GREENHOUSE EFFECT ON THE PLANET. INHALATION OF THIS You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhaustmistgasfogsootsmog
SMOKE
 CAN ALSO
 LEAD TO SEVERAL LUNG DISEASES WHICH COULD SHORTEN This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
LIVES
. AND NOT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
ONLY
 THAT, IT COULD ALSO
 CAUSE THE BIRTHING OF LOW WEIGHT BABIES.

CONCLUSIVELY
, HUMAN ACTIVITIES HAS GREATLY
 CAUSED THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
AIR
 AND WATER QUALITY OF OUR EARTH TO DETERIORATE DRASTICALLY
. Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "Measure NEEDS" or "MEASURES need".Measure NEEDSMEASURES need
MEASURES NEEDS
 TO BE PUT
 IN PLACE TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
REDUCE
 THESE Possible spelling mistake found.Environmental
ENVIROMENTAL
 POLLUTANTS 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"To
SO AS TO
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
MAKE
 THE WORLD A SAFER PLACE TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
LIVE
. 