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Humans have evolved and have been still evaluated for a long time. The people needed a shelter to protect around wild animals. First time, they chose to live in a cave after they learned how to make devices and they reached maternity to make a house shape that we know nowadays. However people’s need of shelter and luxury understanding has been changing around the world. They want to own a house or rent a house. Whereas some people consider owning a house is the best idea, the other people think renting is more logical than spending all the money on a house. People should decide working all life or taking pleasure from this life. I firmly believe that working for a house in my unique life is not logical. Renting a house is a better choice for me. I have some reasons why ı see this. The first reason is that people work and their aim is to save money for surviving life and paying house debts. When they want to have a house, they will need credits from banks. Everybody knows that a bank means high paying interest. For example, my family in Turkey bought a house with the help of bank interest, they still pay their debts for 20 years. They work just to pay for paying a house. There is no doubt that ıt is not different in the USA. My friend in the USA has the same idea. Buying a house because of high bank interest doesn’t look plausible. Secondly, people live an average 70 years and they die. Everybody has an unique life. When you decide to buy a house, you should accept to work for this house during your lifespan. It seems that you will skip your life due to your saving money for a house. For example, people in Italy, they chose to enjoy life rather than buying a house. In addition, your family is unique, too. For instance, while people are dealing with work, they can ‘t see their children’s first steps. Therefore, your life and you are unique in your journey. Conclusion, taking into consideration all of the ideas explained above, I can say that buying a house is not logical for a short and unique life. People should change their meanings for house.
Humans have evolved and have been
still
evaluated for a long time. The
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people
needed a shelter to protect around wild animals.
First
time, they chose to
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live
in a cave after they learned how to
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make
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devices and
they reached maternity to
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make
a
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house
shape that we know nowadays.
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However
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people’s
need of shelter and luxury understanding has been changing around the world. They want to
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own
a
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house
or rent a
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house
. Whereas
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some
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people
consider owning a
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house
is the best
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idea
, the other
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people
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think
renting is more logical than spending all the money on a
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house
.
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People
should decide working all
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life
or taking pleasure from this
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life
. I
firmly
believe that working for a
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house
in my
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unique
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life
is not logical. Renting a
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house
is a better choice for me. I have
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some
reasons why ı
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see
this.

The
first
reason is that
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people
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work
and their aim is to save money for surviving
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life
and paying
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house
debts. When they want to have a
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house
, they will need credits from
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banks
. Everybody knows that a
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bank
means high paying interest.
For example
, my family in Turkey
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bought
a
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house
with the
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help
of
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bank
interest, they
still
pay their debts for 20 years. They
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work
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just
to pay for paying a
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house
. There is no doubt that
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is not
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different
in the USA. My friend in the USA has the same
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idea
. Buying a
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house
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because
of high
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bank
interest doesn’t look plausible.

Secondly
,
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people
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live
an average 70
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years and
they
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die
. Everybody has
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an
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unique
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life
. When you decide to
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buy
a
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house
, you should accept to
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work
for this
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house
during your lifespan. It seems that you will skip your
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life
due to your saving money for a
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house
.
For example
,
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people
in Italy, they chose to enjoy
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life
rather
than buying a
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house
.
In addition
, your family is
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unique
, too.
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, while
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people
are dealing with
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work
, they can ‘t
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see
their children’s
first
steps.
Therefore
, your
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life
and you are
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unique
in your journey.

Conclusion, taking into consideration
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all of the
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ideas
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explained
above, I can say that buying a
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house
is not logical for a short and
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unique
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life
.
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People
should
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change
their meanings for
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house
.
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IELTS essay Humans have evolved and have been still evaluated for a long time.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
383 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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