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Nowadays we see more advertisement on the streets and on our TV screens what are the advantages and disadvantages of these.

Nowadays we see more advertisement on the streets and on our TV screens what are the advantages and disadvantages of these. QQnX
Advertising the product will help to increase the sales, which is the essential tool of marketing. This help the customer to buy product easily and on the negative side, this create consumerism. On the upside, people will gain knowledge about product through advertisement such as feature, quality, and how to use such product. They can easily buy the product after watching ads. Apart form that, some ads are informative. For example, advertisement of polio drop aware public about health of children. On the downside, it create false alarm. Many advertisement campaign on street of interenet, provide fake information, which some time make trouble to people. For example, many people as lose mony on fake job opening ad on internet, in which they demand of some amount in advence to deposit after that they will get direct job in multinational companies. In conclusion, advertisement is the tool to promote the product, which has both merits and demerits, but it upto people to chose product of information wisely.
Advertising the
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product
will
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help
to increase the sales, which is the essential tool of marketing. This
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help
the customer to
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buy
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product
easily
and on the
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negative
side,
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this create
consumerism.

On the upside,
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people
will gain knowledge about
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product
through
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advertisement
such as feature, quality, and how to
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use
such
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product
. They can
easily
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buy
the
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product
after watching ads.
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Apart form
that,
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some
ads are informative.
For example
,
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advertisement of
polio drop aware public about health of children.

On the downside, it
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create
false alarm.
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Many
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advertisement
campaign on street of
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interenet
, provide fake information, which
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some
time
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make
trouble to
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people
.
For example
,
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many
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people
as lose
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mony
on fake job opening ad on internet, in which they demand of
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some
amount in
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advence
to deposit after that they will
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get
direct job in multinational
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companies
.

In conclusion
,
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advertisement
is the tool to promote the
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product
, which has both merits and demerits,
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but
it
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upto
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people
to chose
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product
of information
wisely
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays we see more advertisement on the streets and on our TV screens what are the advantages and disadvantages of these.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
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