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Human resources allocation

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Nowadays the number of younger people are much higher than the number of old age people in few countries of the world. The countries with the situation a huge number of benefits as adults can help accelerating the process of boosting up the financial growth of a country. It is believed that, people who are adult can work harder than old people because of their energetic body and mind. At the early life, they look for opportunities for building their career and are ready to do any kinds of jobs. These helps the country to get more worker for all kinds of job allocated for them. The particular country enjoy the beauty of having more population. In an example, we know about the population of china and how they've worked on figuring out how these much resources can help them to boost up their economical situation. They've allocated diffrent jobs as they have structured their job sector in layers. Without justified from every point of the corner, the process can not be sufficient. In conclusion, the numbers are never the barrier, if the authority can use the right resource in the right place. Rather, human resources are the biggest strenghts of a nation although most of them are not being used properly.
Nowadays the
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of younger
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people
are much higher than the
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number
of
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old
age
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people
in few
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countries
of the world. The
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countries
with the situation a huge
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number
of benefits as adults can
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help
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accelerating
the process of boosting up the financial growth of a country.

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is believed
that,
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people
who are adult can work harder than
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old
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people
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because
of their energetic body and mind. At the early life, they look for opportunities for building their career and are ready to do any kinds of
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jobs
. These
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helps
the
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country
to
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get
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more worker
for all kinds of
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job
allocated for them. The particular
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country
enjoy the beauty of having more population.

In an example, we know about the population of china and how they've worked on figuring out how these
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much
resources can
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help
them to boost up their
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economical
situation. They've allocated
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diffrent
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jobs
as they have structured their
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job
sector in layers. Without justified from every point of the corner, the process can not be sufficient.

In conclusion
, the
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numbers
are never the barrier, if the authority can
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use
the right resource in the right place.
Rather
, human resources are the biggest
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strenghts
of a nation although most of them are not being
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used
properly
.
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IELTS essay Human resources allocation

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
212 words
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