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As the world keeps advancing, smartphones have become inseparable for most individuals. But to have a smartphone nowadays, it started from a telephone. This history of the telephone chronicles the development of the electrical telephone, and includes a brief overview of its predecessors. Telephone was first invented by Alexander Graham Bell, a Scottish-born inventor, scientist, and engineer, on 7 March 1876 Telephone is a telecommunications device that permits two or more users to conduct a conversation when they are too far apart to be heard directly. A telephone converts sound, typically and most efficiently the human voice, into electronic signals that are transmitted via cables and other communication channels to another telephone which reproduces the sound
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This history of the
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telephone
chronicles the development of the electrical
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telephone
, and includes a brief overview of its predecessors.
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Telephone
was
first
invented by Alexander Graham Bell, a Scottish-born inventor, scientist, and engineer, on 7 March
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1876 Telephone
is a
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telecommunications
device that permits two or more users to conduct a conversation when they are too far apart to
be heard
directly
. A
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telephone
converts sound,
typically
and most
efficiently
the human voice, into electronic signals that
are transmitted
via cables and other communication channels to another
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telephone
which reproduces the
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sound
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IELTS essay Human most important invention

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
115 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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