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Environment polution 2022

Environment polution 2022 9Yg50
Despite knowing of about global warming for a long time, smoke which is always released by vehicles like cars, it is a terrible effect on the air and our health. In addition, I agree with the opinion of the government in Britain and I will mention the reason below Nowadays, most of the huge metropolis in the world like London is the place which has been chosen by everyone because of their convenience. It may bring to you many opportunities to look up a career that you can not find in the countryside or remote area. However, traffic jams and pollution are the main causes which make a government has introduced a congestion charge. The tax aims to solve disadvantages for all citizens who have to deal with their problems in a crowded place. It is an effective way to diminish time while we are driving into a certain area at a busy time. For instance, my friends and I used to have an enjoyable trip go to Ho Chi Minh city which is the biggest city in Vietnam. In the afternoon, we make a decision to visit a museum but we are stuck in peak hours to get there. It makes all of them annoying while we must wait for a long time. That’s why the government should have an obstruction tax for a driver who wants to across a city Centre Secondly, money from pollution charges may be spent on others forms of public transport and increasing alternatives to driving. In the other words this is excellent for business, it also helpful for emergency services in getting too serious injures quicker. The bus is one of the excellent instances which I may give it for you and recommend to utilize in widely urban. For all this benefit, I always prefer going by bus to of I support the idea that using public transport more and more in the future to lessen the danger. In conclusion, a government must have a roadblock tax to decrease the number of cars is running into the center every day, it will utilize a little time when they pass through there. And we should be changed the habit of using private vehicles to use a bus or taxi, it aid to improve the quality of pour life and protect our lungs from breathing smokes
Despite knowing of about global warming for a long
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time
, smoke which is always released by vehicles like cars, it is a terrible effect on the air and our health.
In addition
, I
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agree
with the opinion of the
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government
in Britain and I will mention the reason below

Nowadays, most of the huge metropolis in the world like London is the place which has
been chosen
by everyone
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because
of their convenience. It may bring to you
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many
opportunities to look up a career that you can not find in the countryside or remote area.
However
, traffic jams and pollution are the main causes which
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make
a
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government
has introduced a congestion charge. The tax aims to solve disadvantages for all citizens who
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
deal with their problems in a crowded place. It is an effective way to diminish
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
while we are driving into a certain area at a busy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
For instance
, my friends and I
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used
to have an enjoyable trip go to
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
Ho Chi Minh city
which is the biggest city in Vietnam. In the afternoon, we
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make
a decision to visit a museum
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but
we
are stuck
in peak hours to
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get
there. It
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makes
all of them annoying while we
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must
wait for a long
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time
. That’s why the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should have an obstruction tax for a driver who wants to across a city
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Centre


Secondly
, money from pollution charges may
be spent
on others forms of public transport and increasing alternatives to driving. In the other words this is excellent for business,
It seems that a verb is missing.
it
also
helpful for emergency services in getting too serious injures quicker. The bus is one of the excellent instances which I may give it for you and
The verb 'recommend' is used with the gerund form: "recommend utilizing".
recommend to utilize
in
widely
urban. For all this benefit, I always prefer going by bus to of I support the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
that using public transport more and more in the future to lessen the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
danger
.

In conclusion
, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have a roadblock tax to decrease the number of cars is running into the center every day, it will utilize a
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little
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
when they pass through there. And we should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
the habit of using private vehicles to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a bus or taxi, it
Did you mean "aids"?
aid
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the quality of pour life and protect our lungs from breathing
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
smokes

IELTS essay Environment polution 2022

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
390 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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