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Human is a menace to animal.What are the possible that we made for animals?what are the suggested solution?

Human is a menace to animal. What are the possible that we made for animals? what are the suggested solution? E3wPD
Nowadays animal’s life is puted in jeopardy by people. In following the paragraphs, both possible problems and some measures that could be considered to tackle them will be discussed. There are some dangers that caused by human. First of all is excessive hunting for dressing, eating, entertaining some rare species face extinction because of fluctuations of birth and death. Over centuries humans have experimented with many different chemicals, products, and processes, with the final aim of bettering their condition. The second reason is logging trees. By cutting down the trees, people encourage destroy the living environment of animal; consequently, animal’s life would be in danger of extinction. Finaly, People think that humans are the most important beings on the planet, and everything must be done to ensure human survival; Furthermore, it is believed by some that animals do not feel pain or loss as humans do, so if people have to kill animals for food or other uses, then this is morally acceptable. To solve the problems, some steps can be taken by government. It is important to punish animals annoyer by pay a huge penalty and jil. Government should establish strict lows for banning the people how put animal and their environment in jeopardy; moreover, people should obey and respect these lows for making animal’s life safer. On the other hand Individual should take the responsibility of protecting the animals around them, so human should be cautious that their natural resources are irreplaceable. In conclution, there are a pelenty of problems associated whit people how ignore animal’s life that should be solved by both people and government.
Nowadays
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animal’s
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life
is
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in jeopardy by
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people
. In following the paragraphs, both possible problems and
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some
measures that could
be considered
to tackle them will
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.

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some
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dangers
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human
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some
rare species face extinction
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because
of fluctuations of birth and death. Over centuries
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humans
have experimented with
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many
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different
chemicals, products, and processes, with the final aim of bettering their condition. The second reason is logging trees. By cutting down the trees,
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people
encourage
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destroy
the living environment of
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animal
;
consequently
,
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animal’s
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life
would be in
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danger
of extinction.
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People
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think
that
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humans
are the most
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important
beings on the planet, and everything
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must
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to ensure
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human
survival;
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, it
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by
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some
that
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animals
do not feel pain or loss as
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humans
do,
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so
if
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people
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have to
kill
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animals
for food or other
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uses
, then this is
morally
acceptable.

To solve the problems,
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steps can
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by
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government
. It is
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important
to punish
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animals
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by pay a huge penalty and
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.
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should establish strict lows for banning the
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people
how put
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animal
and their environment in jeopardy;
moreover
,
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people
should obey and respect these lows for making
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animal’s
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life
safer.
On the other hand
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animals
around them,
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so
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human
should be cautious that their natural resources are irreplaceable.

In
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conclution
, there are a
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pelenty
of problems associated whit
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people
how
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ignore
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animal’s
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life
that should
be solved
by both
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people
and
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government
.
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IELTS essay Human is a menace to animal. What are the possible that we made for animals? what are the suggested solution?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
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