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The picture depicts the man-made production of tea and a cup of tea through an 18-step procedure. Overall, there are several stages, commencing with the growing tea trees in certain areas and the dissolution with hot water and drinking it at the end. To begin, tea is grown in India and China, where the seeds are spread on the cultivated farmland. Once the plants are under the sunshine, they start growing. Meanwhile, the farmers pick the leaves and put them into the basket. Tea leaves are then dried beneath the sunlight. Subsequently, they are packed into boxes and transported to the supermarkets with a lorry to put on the market. When it comes to having a tea, the customers have to purchase tea boxes at the stores. At home, water is boiled in the kettle and a tea bag is inserted into the cup. Next, the hot water is poured and mixed with them. The tea is left for two minutes and is added milk or sugar. Finally, the tea is already for consuming.
The picture depicts the
man
-made production of
tea
and a cup of
tea
through an 18-step procedure.

Overall
, there are several stages, commencing with the growing
tea
trees in certain areas and the dissolution with hot water and drinking it at the
end
.

To
begin
,
tea
is grown
in India and China, where the seeds
are spread
on the cultivated farmland. Once the plants are under the sunshine, they
start
growing. Meanwhile, the farmers pick the
leaves
and put them into the basket.
Tea
leaves
are then dried beneath the sunlight.
Subsequently
, they
are packed
into boxes and transported to the supermarkets with a lorry to put on the market.

When it
comes
to having a
tea
, the customers
have to
purchase
tea
boxes at the stores. At home, water
is boiled
in the kettle and a
tea
bag
is inserted
into the cup.
Next
, the hot water
is poured
and mixed with them. The
tea
is
left
for two minutes and is
added
milk or sugar.
Finally
, the
tea
is already for consuming.
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Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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