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How were you interested in science

How were you interested in science aJXXY
Being exposed to computers at an early age most likely built the foundation for my desire to become a data scientist. Back in the day, my dad got an old desktop tower with a CRT monitor as our home computer. I somehow learned to use that machine before I even knew how to read. As a kid, it was always a struggle navigating the operating system. I think it was those trials and tribulations, fumbling through different “windows” that sparked my interest in computers. Growing up, my passion for new technologies never ends. I remember spending hours at computer stores to have a look at the latest laptops. It got under my skin that I could not answer the most basic questions about how they work. When I press a button or perform any function, it magically knows what to do. It was curiosity that drove me to study more, simply so that one day I can understand the physics behind those machines and the principles of how they operate. The more I study, the more I realize my love for math and engineering. Knowing that a solid foundation in science is essential to become an engineer academically, I aimed for an engineering school. I was thankful that I got accepted to UTC, as I understand that my journey to an actual data scientist would begin here.
Being exposed
to computers at an early age most likely built the foundation for my desire to become a data scientist. Back in the day, my dad
got
an
old
desktop tower with a CRT monitor as our home computer. I somehow learned to
use
that machine
before
I even knew how to read. As a kid, it was always a struggle
navigating
the operating system. I
think
it was those trials and tribulations, fumbling through
different
“windows” that sparked my interest in computers.

Growing up, my passion for new technologies never ends. I remember spending hours at computer stores to have a look at the latest laptops. It
got
under my skin that I could not answer the most basic questions about how they work. When I press a button or perform any function, it
magically
knows what to do. It was curiosity that drove me to study more,
simply
so
that one day I can understand the physics behind those machines and the principles of how they operate.

The more I study, the more I realize my
love
for math and engineering.

Knowing that a solid foundation in science is essential to become an engineer
academically
, I aimed for an engineering school. I was thankful that I
got
accepted
to UTC, as I understand that my journey to an actual data scientist would
begin
here.
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IELTS essay How were you interested in science

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