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Many people nowadays rely heavily on smartphones, and spend most of their time using a smartphones. In my opinion, I think it is very important and better to use a smartphones in the life, but some people disagree. I have three main reasons for my opinion. My first reason is that ease and speed of communication with others. For example, It's easy to send a message to someone over the Internet or call them in a matter of seconds, and we can send an audio recording, send our work, and share our photos and files in less time. Secondly, The size of smartphones and tablets. For instance, You can carry your smartphone or mobile device anywhere, being small in size. My third reason is that Some people use their phones as a "safety cover" to deal with anxiety and loneliness. For example, Some people break up because they are anxious, shy, and lonely or pretend to be busy instead of communicating face to face.

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