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How to manage your money

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When you’re in debt, it can be easy to pretend everything is fine. Until one day. . . it catches up with you. Yep—debt is dumb. Real dumb. And the only way to get rid of it is by facing it. if you’re wondering how to get out of debt, you’ve come to the right place. Well the main question is how to clear your debts as soon as possible the key is right here instead of running up huge debt start cutting down on luxuries The life of luxuries made with loans and debts is useless and will soon be destroyed, but wait if you cutting your expenditures you can pay off your debts as soon as possible
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, it can be easy to pretend everything is fine. Until one day.
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as possible the key is right here

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cutting down on luxuries

The life of luxuries made with loans and
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is useless and will
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be
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IELTS essay How to manage your money

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
118 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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