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Workplaces in the modern world have increased the value of experiences in a particular field more than knowledge a person may have, many countries around the world adopted this principle of experience over knowledge. This concept can be seen in the hiring process and can even be seen in a consideration of giving someone a raise to their salary. Fundamentally, an advantage to this concept can be seen in medical fields, learning something in a realistic situation can be proven more effective than adapting knowledge from textbooks. A doctor with experience may know how to deal with stress and curing patients, compared to a doctor who only knows the theory of healing patients. This value shift can guarantee a medical facility that the doctors are capable of dealing with stress as well as adapting to certain situations. Moreover, universities can be assured that their candidates are indeed well equipped with skills such as teamworks, leadership and maturity, which cannot be taught in a traditional theory school. Candidates who are exposed to working in teams may receive teamwork and leadership skills that may not be able to recapture when studying alone, peoples who work in teams may have a sense of maturity when leading a team which is a skill only learned by experience. Contrastingly, having such experience may not guarantee one’s success, in the case of working in fields that require trust, experience may create an ego which can ruin a project or even lives. When working in a vessel one would have to trust the mechanical capabilities of the craft, if the one piloting has a high ego by trusting their skills over the vessel’s capabilities, it may cause careless decision making thinking that could ruin lives. To conclude, the advantages of valuing experience over knowledge outweighs the disadvantage. Being in a realistic situation or being more well-equipped with necessary skills required in future development in a workplace would be a benefit, however, having a high ego caused by an extent of experience can be easily resolved by re-training the one with high ego to reduce the over-trust in one’s skill. The workplace nowadays would be more well-equipped with skills and experts in a specific field as most countries followed this principle.
Workplaces in the modern world have increased the value of
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experiences
in a particular
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field
more than
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knowledge
a person may have,
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many
countries around the world adopted this principle of
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experience
over
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knowledge
. This concept can be
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seen
in the hiring process and can even be
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seen
in a consideration of giving someone a raise to their salary.

Fundamentally
, an advantage to this concept can be
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seen
in medical
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fields
, learning something in a realistic situation can
be proven
more effective than adapting
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knowledge
from textbooks. A doctor with
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experience
may know how to deal with
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stress
and curing patients, compared to a doctor who
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only
knows the theory of healing patients. This value shift can guarantee a medical facility that the doctors are capable of dealing with
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stress
as well
as adapting to certain situations.

Moreover
, universities can
be assured
that their candidates are
indeed
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well equipped
with
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skills
such as
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teamworks
, leadership and maturity, which cannot
be taught
in a traditional theory school. Candidates who
are exposed
to working in teams may receive teamwork and leadership
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skills
that may not be able to recapture when studying alone, peoples who work in teams may have a sense of maturity when leading a team which is a
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skill
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
learned by experience.

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Contrastingly
, having such
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experience
may not guarantee one’s success, in the case of working in
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fields
that require trust,
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experience
may create an
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ego
which can ruin a project or even
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lives
. When working in a vessel one would
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have to
trust the mechanical capabilities of the craft, if the one piloting has a high
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ego
by trusting their
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skills
over the vessel’s capabilities, it may cause careless
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decision making
thinking that could ruin
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lives
.

To conclude
, the advantages of valuing
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experience
over
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knowledge
outweighs the disadvantage. Being in a realistic situation or being more well-equipped with necessary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
required in future development in a workplace would be a benefit,
however
, having a high
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ego
caused by an extent of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
can be
easily
resolved by re-training the one with high
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ego
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the over-trust in one’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skill
. The workplace nowadays would be more well-equipped with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
and experts in a specific
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
field
as most countries followed this principle.
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IELTS essay Experience and knowing lmao

Essay
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5 paragraphs
373 words
5.5
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