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I live in Hungary and in my country, people usually do running or home exercises to keep fit themselves. Most of the urban people have their thoughts about being fit and healthy. That is an important way in my opinion too. There are loads of useful sports, which are hard to afford, for example tennis, but there are much more way to do cheaper sports. Golf is like that. This activity is getting more fame and Hungarian people are interested in it.
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usually
do running or home exercises to
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keep
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people
have their thoughts about
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important
way in my opinion too. There are loads of useful sports, which are
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hard
to afford,
for example
tennis,
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there are much more way to do cheaper sports. Golf is like that. This activity is getting more fame and Hungarian
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Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
82 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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