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How to keep fit in this days?

How to keep fit in this days? x0pA6
No matter how awful your stomach is telling you to go for candy over healthy healthy food and maintain your weight in a steadily range. Consequently, you must eat such a food that is nutritious because it has got extravagant beneficial and help you to be well-being. In addition, you can recommend your siblings or your friend to prevent eating unhealthy foods and should eat more vital foods. Moreover, I believe the most significant strategies for preventing obesity are healthy eating behaviors regularly physical activity and reduce sedentary activity. Ultimately body weight is the result of genetic, environment and behavior. In conclusion, you can do excersice as a result to keep fitness.
No matter how awful your stomach is telling you to go for candy over
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and maintain your weight in a
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, you
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eat such a
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that is
nutritious
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because
it has
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got
extravagant beneficial and
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help
you to be well-being.
In addition
, you can recommend your siblings or your friend to
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prevent
eating unhealthy
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foods
and should eat more vital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
.
Moreover
, I believe the most significant strategies for preventing obesity are healthy eating behaviors
regularly
physical activity and
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reduce
sedentary activity.
Ultimately
body weight is the result of genetic, environment and behavior.
In conclusion
, you can do
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excersice
as a result
to
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keep
fitness.
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IELTS essay How to keep fit in this days?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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