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how the pharmacist plays a role in the society

The flow of the time can not resist in light of the fact that of the society would continue to growing. Therefore, the possibility for the healthcare workers in the future could not neglect although it is rarely revealed through the public. The principle of the healthcare system establishment in Asia with a high function and well-quality is fast and acceleration is rapid, especially in the democratic country. Indeed, the process for contributed the regulation ought to be figure out and testing by the professionals is the majority task of the medical field. Base on the qualify through the Pharmaceutical Industry, and the cooperation with Government authority, it forms an exquisites and complex network for individual to recognize the health industry as part of the health system. For example, rehabilitation and emergency medical treatments etc. Responsibility of professional in the medical field, Pharmacist provide a bunch of resources for the public health of colossal information and the of those is well critical when the people in use. The vital inform for the general citizen in modern world, health care through the long- term training and a few examinations. As a result, when the experience acceration, Pharmacy supplement not only for the medicines, but also the other gadgets, like the body temperature monitoring mechanic products, a usual machinery that should storage in the general family. So far, Pharmacist manage to figure out the details of the medical needs. When the information transmitted through various extremely high function tactics, the precise and excellent treatments always has an expectation by public. Health is one of the critical survival elements in order to enhance the society. The reality for the society has to be content the environment need. Consequently, for the foundation of the human nature, health care would not digress too far from the central of the life science. As a matter of fact, during the work in the Hospital Pharmacy it does support the knowledge for the last decades of being supporter of the health knowledge. In Taiwan, the authority pay much more attention on the public health and effort on the health insurance. Ironic, the effort did receive the solution and it could accept the rewards. Over the past experiences and courses from learning, there has a specific concept role for the Pharmacists for enhance the the society medical quality. Healthcare worker playing society character and function, not only for dispensing the prescriptions, but also the knowledge could be fully presented on the patient medical consultation. For example, Chemotherapy patient is one of the major target for the consultation. As matter of fact, the high dosage of anti-laxative medication might elevate the toxicity of heart poison. Due to the long-term contact of the related cases, the interest of the patient consultation has elevated without any barrier. Although there do not has clear system for pharmacist exquisites in a particular medicine field, on the contrary, it definitely require pay much more effort on the learning. However, if the rewarding is higher than expected, the education of the pharmaceutical tutors of field definitely would provide the impressive and fulfilling classes. Personality would attain the the lectures has specific titles. In addition, the tactics to discover the similar courses would present a detail and information, it could focus on the compliance of the patients education: 1. Easy to be absorb from the healthcare tutorial. 2. Satisfaction. 3. Immediately rewarding. For the commitment of the complex discussions and practices of the newly medical gadgets, it could interfere the willingness of the patient on the usage of the medication. Indeed, human nerve system rewarding function usually require the process which could review from the previous access and it might has the possibility effect to generate the the medication compliance. General speaking, it is rare that adult take oral medication to be trigger the unrequited nuance adverse effect and the possibility is in an extremely minor ratio. However, compare to the expectation and rewarding after taking the medication, if there do not receive result they want, the rejection for the medication compliance would be induced under such a circumstance. Hence, in order to keep taking medication being part of the life style, compliance is one of the key process which health professionals to manifesto the patients. On the contrary, the tactics to sort out the in the various categories include ages, genders, times, personalities, the families and friends so on. Even the healthcare worker s would be the main consideration. Another inclusion of the vital point must rely on the consequence after taking the medication, and the pharmaceutical manufacturing and the process is related to the solution of side effects.
The flow of the time can not resist in light of the fact that of the society would continue to growing.
Therefore
, the possibility for the healthcare workers in the future could not neglect although it is rarely revealed
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through
the public. The principle of the healthcare system establishment in Asia with a high
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function
and well-quality is
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fast
and acceleration is rapid,
especially
in the democratic country.

Indeed
, the
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process
for contributed the regulation ought to be figure out and testing by the professionals is the majority task of the
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medical
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field
. Base on
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the qualify
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through
the Pharmaceutical Industry, and the cooperation with
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Government
authority, it forms an
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exquisites
and complex network for individual to recognize the
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health
industry as part of the
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health
system.

For example
, rehabilitation and emergency
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medical
treatments etc. Responsibility
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of


professional in the
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medical
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field
,
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Pharmacist
provide a bunch of resources for the

public
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health
of colossal information and the of those is well critical when the

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people
in
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use
.

The vital inform for the general citizen in modern world,
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health
care
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through
the long-

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term
training and a few examinations.
As a result
, when the experience
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acceration
,

Pharmacy supplement not
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only
for the medicines,
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but
also
the other gadgets, like the

body temperature monitoring mechanic products, a usual machinery that should storage

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in
the general family.
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So
far,
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Pharmacist
manage to figure out the
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details
of the
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medical


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needs
. When the information transmitted
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through
various
extremely
high
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function
tactics, the precise and excellent treatments always has an expectation by public. Health

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is
one of the critical survival elements in order to enhance the society.

The reality for the society
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has to
be content the environment need.

Consequently
, for the foundation of the human nature,
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health
care would not digress

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too
far from the central of the life science. As a matter of fact, during the work in
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the


Hospital Pharmacy it does support the knowledge for the last decades of being

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supporter
of the
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health
knowledge. In Taiwan, the authority pay much more attention
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on


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the
public
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health
and effort on the
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health
insurance. Ironic, the effort did receive the

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solution
and it could accept the rewards. Over the
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past experiences
and courses
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from


learning, there has a specific concept role for the
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Pharmacists
for enhance
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the the


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society
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medical
quality. Healthcare worker playing society character and
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function
,
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not


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only
for dispensing the prescriptions,
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but
also
the knowledge could be
fully
presented

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on
the
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patient
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medical
consultation.
For example
, Chemotherapy
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patient
is one of
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the


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major
target for the consultation. As matter of fact, the high dosage of
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anti-laxative


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medication
might elevate the toxicity of heart poison. Due to the long-term contact
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of


the related cases, the interest of the
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patient
consultation has elevated without any

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barrier
. Although there do not
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has
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clear
system for
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pharmacist
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exquisites
in a
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particular


medicine
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field
,
on the contrary
, it definitely
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require
pay much more effort on the

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learning
.
However
, if the rewarding is higher than
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expected
, the education of the

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pharmaceutical
tutors of
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field
definitely would provide the impressive and fulfilling classes. Personality would attain
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the the
lectures has specific titles.
In addition
,
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the


tactics to discover the similar courses would present a detail and information, it could

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focus
on the compliance of the
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patients
education: 1. Easy to be
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absorb
from
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the


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healthcare
tutorial. 2. Satisfaction. 3. Immediately rewarding. For the commitment of
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the


complex discussions and practices of the
newly
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medical
gadgets, it could interfere the

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willingness
of the
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patient
on the usage of the
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medication
.
Indeed
, human nerve system

rewarding
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function
usually
require the
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process
which could review from the previous

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access
and it might
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has
the possibility effect to generate
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the the
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medication
compliance.

General speaking, it is rare that adult take oral
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medication
to be trigger the unrequited

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nuance
adverse effect and the possibility is in an
extremely
minor ratio.

However
, compare to the expectation and rewarding after taking the
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medication
, if

there do not receive result they want, the rejection for the
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medication
compliance

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would
be induced
under such a circumstance.
Hence
, in order to
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keep
taking medication

being part of the
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life style
, compliance is one of the key
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process
which health

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professionals
to manifesto the
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patients
.
On the contrary
, the tactics to sort out the in
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the


various categories include ages, genders, times, personalities, the families and friends

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so
on. Even the healthcare worker s would be the main consideration. Another
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inclusion


of the vital point
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must
rely on the
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consequence after
taking the
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medication
, and the

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pharmaceutical
manufacturing and the
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process
is related
to the solution of side effects.
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IELTS essay how the pharmacist plays a role in the society

Essay
  American English
49 paragraphs
773 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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