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how mistress do with her slaves

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mistress is who humilates and tortures her slaves. she obligates them to kiss and lick her feet and hands. she whips and canes them. she bastinado them. her slaves don't have right to speak without permission. sometimes mistress wants to their slave play a role like a dog. they should lick their owner's feet and eat their food on the ground without using hands. somtimes she toture them until they start to cry. somtimes she make them message her feet.
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mistress
is who
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humilates
and tortures her slaves.
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she
obligates them to kiss and lick her feet and hands.
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she
whips and canes them.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "bastinadoes", "bastinados", "bastinadoed".
bastinado
them.
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her
slaves don't have right to speak without permission.
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sometimes
mistress wants to their slave play a role like a dog.
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they
should lick their owner's feet and eat their food on the ground without using hands.
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somtimes
she
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toture
them until they
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start
to cry.
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somtimes
she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "makes", "made".
make
them message her feet.
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IELTS essay how mistress do with her slaves

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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