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Energy from the Sun the Earth as heat. Some of this heat energy is radiated into space, while some of it is trapped by greenhouse gases in the atmosphere and reflected back to Earth. This is a natural process, but in recent decades, human activities have led to an increase in the amounts of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere which is now trapping too much heat. One of the main greenhouse gases is carbon dioxide, and extra quantities of this are released/have been released into the atmosphere as a result of burning fossil fuels as a source of energy in power stations, factories and homes. Exhaust gases from cars and lorries result in/have resulted in further emissions of carbon dioxide. Plants serve to remove some of the carbon dioxide from the atmosphere by absorbing it through their leaves. However, as large areas of forest are felled/are being felled/have in the Amazon and elsewhere, carbon dioxide is removed in this way.

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Some
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some
 of it is trapped
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 and reflected back to Earth. This is a natural process, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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recent decades, human activities have led to an increase in the amounts of greenhouse You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gases
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now
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carbon
 dioxide, and extra quantities of this are released
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atmosphere
as a result
 of burning fossil fuels as a source of energy in power stations, factories and homes. Exhaust You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gases
 from cars and lorries result in/have resulted in further
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carbon
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Plants serve to remove If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
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carbon
 dioxide from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpressureair
atmosphere
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leaves
. However
, as large areas of forest are felled
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/have

in the Amazon and elsewhere, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsootgraphite
carbon
 dioxide is removed
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