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‏How do the paramedic's action? ‏The accidents happen every day and many people are survive because of the paramedics, today I will talk about how paramedic is actions in steps.

‏How do the paramedic's action? ‏The accidents happen every day and many people are survive because of the paramedics, today I will talk about how paramedic is actions in steps. 0EmMn

‏First, when they arrive at accident site. they park at a safe place then ensure everyone’s safety. ‏Second, they assess the situation by look for casualties first. Then they give more attention to those unresponsive, and they don’t move patients from place to place. Third-steps, they handle serious injured carefully. They stop bleeding of the patient first. After that they check for breathing and check for pulse of the patient. Finally, they move who seriously injured to hospital. They use collar because to secure neck and spine. Since they move patients carefully, they use stretcher. They take most seriously injured to hospital first. ‏In conclusion, if you follow these steps you will be able to survive a patient.

‏First
, when they arrive at accident site. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
 park at a safe place then ensure everyone’s safety.

‏Second, they assess the situation by look for casualties first
. Then they give more attention to those unresponsive, and they don’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinmatecasevictimsubjectsufferer
patients
 from place to place. Third-steps, they handle serious injured carefully
. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 bleeding of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgentleforgivingtolerantcalmquiet
patient
first
. After that they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 for breathing and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 for pulse of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgentleforgivingtolerantcalmquiet
patient
. Finally
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 who seriously
 injured to hospital. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 collar This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 to secure neck and spine. Since they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinmatecasevictimsubjectsufferer
patients
carefully
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 stretcher. They take most seriously
 injured to hospital first
.

‏In conclusion
, if you follow these steps you will be able to survive a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgentleforgivingtolerantcalmquiet
patient
. 