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How can we ensure that we do not harm the environment

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Protect environment is one of the most important thing. There are a lot of things can harm the environment like smoking, plastic, chemicals, and petrol car. In my opinion, the government have to put strong role to ensure that people will help in environment protection. Because children will do the same that parents are doing, parents they have not to harm the environment. Schools also can help by teaching student the good behavior. when we make sure that people know the true way to interact with environment, we will get a good and healthy environment
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like smoking, plastic, chemicals, and petrol car. In my opinion, the
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government
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. Schools
also
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sure that
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know the true way to interact

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IELTS essay How can we ensure that we do not harm the environment

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
94 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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