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Describe the traffic jam in your country While speaking, you should also talk about: How it happens Why do you think it happens Can it be controlled or managed

Describe the traffic jam in your country While speaking, you should also talk about: How it happens Why do you think it happens Can it be controlled or managed XqoRr
Life is getting fast day by day, everybody is in hurry. Most of the time people got late due to some personal reason and they drive their vehicle rashly which lead to many accident. It is almost in the every country and people stuck in traffic jam due to this. I really want to highlight traffic jam of my country. Almost every metro and big cities face this traffic stucking problem. In my country although although there is traffic signal and traffic police to control it, but anyone from this crowd break the traffic rules and create a problem for other even he or she also catch in tartar. People feel like that they are king and they are the only person who has the right to be on the first position on the road, due to these kind of mentality force them to drive two wheeler or four wheeler blindly. they break the traffic light if there is no traffic controller from police authority. most of the time it observed the sports bile rider did this. They wear all the protecting equipment, but they don't realize common man is also on the road and they are crossing the road by following the rules. Also rash driver not think of other they have to keep them into other's shoes. due to these kind of unattentive attitude. Traffic jam can be seen every where. Every problem has a solluton because everything has shape on the another side. If public plan there day in advance and leave house 5-10 minutes before they can drive without any stress. Also everybody have to give respect to other time and right of first come first out. They have to follow the rules which is meant to obay not to break. Police is doing there best to takle this warst issue but now its our duties to be self trained.
Life is getting
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fast
day by day, everybody is in hurry. Most of the time
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people
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got
late
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due
to
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some
personal
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reason and
they drive their vehicle
rashly
which lead to
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many accident
. It is almost in the every country and
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people
stuck in
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traffic
jam
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due
to this. I
really
want to highlight
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traffic
jam of my country. Almost every metro and
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big
cities face this
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traffic
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stucking
problem. In my country
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although although
there is
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traffic
signal and
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traffic
police to control it,
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but
anyone from this crowd break the
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traffic
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rules
and create a problem for other even he or she
also
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catch
in tartar.
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People
feel like that they are
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king and
they are the
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only
person who has the right to be on the
first
position on the road,
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due
to
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these kind
of mentality force them to drive
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two wheeler
or four
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wheeler
blindly
.
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they
break the
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traffic
light if there is no
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traffic
controller from police authority.
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most
of the time it observed the sports bile rider did this. They wear all the protecting equipment,
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but
they don't realize common
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man
is
also
on the
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road and
they are crossing the road by following the
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rules
.
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Also
rash driver not
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think
of other they
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have to
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keep
them into other's shoes.
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due
to
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these kind
of
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unattentive
attitude.
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Traffic
jam can be
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seen
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every where
. Every problem has a
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solluton
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because
everything has shape on the another side. If public plan there day in advance and
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leave
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house
5-10 minutes
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before
they can drive without any
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stress
.
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Also
everybody
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have
to give respect to other time and right of
first
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come
first
out. They
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have to
follow the
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rules
which
is meant
to
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obay
not to break. Police is doing there best to
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takle
this
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warst issue
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but
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now
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its
our duties to be self trained.
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IELTS essay Describe the traffic jam in your country While speaking, you should also talk about: How it happens Why do you think it happens Can it be controlled or managed

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
314 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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