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how big is your family what are some good things about having a small family what are some negatibe aspects

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Since, Tradition and customs are in a state of flux nowadays as compared to past century. one of result of these cultural upheavals that parents in many countries having to choose one child. In this essay, I consider what is the advantages and potential drawback of nuclear families, according to children's and parents' prospective. First and foremost, on behalf of both parents, they are having much time and money, consequently they can provide better education to children and also save money for children. secondly, they have plethora money and less burden as compared to large families so having a one or two children means that few demands of their time and wallets. Pursuing this further from the child's point of view, having one sibling play mammoth role to develop socially, professionally and academic level properly and receives more attention and confidence too from sibling during difficult situations otherwise they feel loneliness. After all despite, There should be some drawback to having one child because after age sixty parents should be retired and old they need much care and attention, but due to any circumstance if children migrate to another country for higher education or argue, become selfish and over parented in younger age that time parents suffer a lot. To recapitulate, about small families everyone has been individual opine maybe it can be positive or negative. Personally, I can acknowledge about potential problems, I feel that small families can be ultimately back offs.
Since, Tradition and customs are in a state of flux nowadays as compared to past century.
one
of result of these cultural upheavals that
parents
in
many
countries
having
to choose one child. In this essay, I consider what is the advantages and potential drawback of nuclear
families
, according to children's and parents' prospective.

First
and foremost, on behalf of both
parents
, they are
having
much time and money,
consequently
they can provide better education to
children
and
also
save money for
children
.
secondly
, they have plethora money and less burden as compared to large
families
so
having
a one or two
children
means that few demands of their time and wallets.

Pursuing this
further
from the child's point of view,
having
one sibling play mammoth role to develop
socially
,
professionally
and academic level
properly
and receives more attention and confidence too from sibling during difficult situations
otherwise
they feel loneliness.

After all
despite, There should be
some
drawback to
having
one child
because
after age sixty
parents
should
be retired
and
old
they need much care and attention,
but
due to any circumstance if
children
migrate to another country for higher education or argue, become selfish and over parented in younger age that time
parents
suffer a lot.

To recapitulate, about
small
families
everyone has been individual opine maybe it can be
positive
or
negative
.
Personally
, I can acknowledge about potential problems, I feel that
small
families
can be
ultimately
back offs.
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IELTS essay how big is your family what are some good things about having a small family what are some negatibe aspects

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