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Every countries are facing the problem of climate change and it is overwhelmingly bad for country which basically happen due to human activities.

Every countries are facing the problem of climate change and it is overwhelmingly bad for country which basically happen due to human activities. 668l0
Every countries are facing the problem of climate change and it is overwhelmingly bad for country which basically happen due to human activities. Although people do not care of the environment. Nowadays, every people like to live comfortable life. such as, faster transportation, new technological gadget, good infrastructure etc. Although, we are spoiling our environment directly due to more transportation. It may possible to increase carbon emimision in climate that increase climate temperature gradually. Moreover, AC can omit more unnecessary gas and that disruptive ozoen layer. So ultraviolate ray directly strike on the earth that increase earth temperature. Basically, the drug and chemical industries has spreaded more gase and chemical water that it can effect on climate change. Due to climate change, earth nature cycle can be desturbed that the directly effect on earth weather. People can face so many problems due to climate change. For instant, temperature can increase rapidly, fire in forest, acidic rain, and flood etc. Although, people are very worried about this phenomenon and that can stop climate change by some basic steps. First, we should grow tree for once in year. Petrol and disel vehicale we should use as a reqire. People away from plastic use. It is all over individual responsibility. But goverment need to impose stric rules against chemical and drug industries and also encourage to people for save environment. As per all above points, climate change can tremendous impect on human and environment and I am agrre on this statement and human can stop this phenomenon by changing their life style and care of environment.
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countries
are facing the problem of
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climate
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change
and it is
overwhelmingly
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bad
for country which
basically
happen due to human activities.
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Although
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people
do not care of the environment.

Nowadays, every
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people
like to
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live
comfortable life.
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such
as, faster transportation, new technological gadget,
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good
infrastructure etc. Although, we are spoiling our environment
directly
due to more transportation. It
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may possible
to
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increase
carbon
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emimision
in
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climate
that
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increase
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climate
temperature
gradually
.
Moreover
, AC can omit more unnecessary gas and that disruptive
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ozoen
layer.
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So
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ultraviolate
ray
directly
strike on the
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earth
that
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increase
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earth
temperature.
Basically
, the drug and chemical industries has
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spreaded
more
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gase
and chemical water that it can effect on
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climate
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change
.

Due to
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climate
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change
,
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earth
nature cycle can be
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desturbed
that the
directly
effect on
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earth
weather.
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People
can face
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so
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many
problems due to
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climate
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change
. For instant, temperature can
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increase
rapidly
, fire in forest, acidic rain, and flood etc.

Although,
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people
are
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very
worried about this phenomenon and that can
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stop
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climate
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change
by
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some
basic steps.
First
, we should grow tree for once in year. Petrol and
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disel
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vehicale
we should
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use
as a
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reqire
.
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People
away from plastic
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use
. It is all over individual responsibility.
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But
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goverment
need to impose
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stric
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rules
against chemical and drug industries and
also
encourage to
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people
for save environment.

As per all above points,
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climate
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change
can tremendous
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impect
on human and environment and I am
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agrre
on this statement and human can
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stop
this phenomenon by changing their
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life
style and care of environment.
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IELTS essay Every countries are facing the problem of climate change and it is overwhelmingly bad for country which basically happen due to human activities.

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