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Hosting an international sports event can have lots of advantages but it also comes with some disadvantages.

Hosting an international sports event can have lots of advantages but it also comes with some disadvantages. Although in my opinion, the advantages far out weight the disadvantages. When hosting a sports event there are lots of preparations to do for example scheduling the date, time, place and also the amount t of people allowed to watch the event, add in the fact that it would be an international sports event it doubles if not increases the pressure on the authorities. They have to take into consideration not only any potential threats to the players/ participants but also to the local public sitting there enjoying the show. If anything happens to them the country's reputation will be at stake, not only it can receive a lot of hatred from other countries but also might never get a chance to hold an event of such a large scale in the future. One of the prime examples will be the shooting in Pakistan where Sri Lanka's cricket team was shot when they were on their way to the game, Pakistan received a ton of hatred from other countries and there wasn't a single international event in Pakistan for the next eight years. While it is true that arrangements can be a bit challenging but with strategic planning and thinking these difficulties can be overcome. On the bright side of things, an international event can attract a lot of tourism to the hosting country which will be good for the businesses in the country as the tourists will buy stuff. Furthermore, in most cases, if the event goes smoothly it might factor in a positive way for the teams to come back to the hosting country. These events will also be an opportunity to show the hospitality of the natives of the land. All in all, hosting an international event for any country is a great opportunity which will be advantageous to the country rather than creating a lot of difficulties.
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a sports
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scheduling the date, time, place and
also
the amount t of
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people
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allowed
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,
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in the fact that it would be an
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international
sports
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event
it doubles if not increases the pressure on the authorities. They
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have to
take into consideration not
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any potential threats to the players/ participants
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but
also
to the local public sitting there enjoying the
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show
. If anything happens to them the country's reputation will be at stake, not
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only
it can receive a
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lot
of hatred from other
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countries
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also
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event
of such a large scale in the future. One of the prime examples will be the shooting in Pakistan where Sri Lanka's cricket team
was shot
when they were on their way to the game, Pakistan received a ton of hatred from other
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countries
and there wasn't a single
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international
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event
in Pakistan for the
next
eight years.

While it is true that arrangements can be a bit challenging
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but
with strategic planning and thinking these difficulties can
be overcome
. On the bright side of things, an
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international
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event
can attract a
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lot
of tourism to the
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hosting
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country
which will be
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good
for the businesses in the
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country
as the tourists will
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buy
stuff.

Furthermore
,
in most cases
, if the
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event
goes
smoothly
it might factor in a
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positive
way for the teams to
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come
back to the
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hosting
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country
. These
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events
will
also
be an opportunity to
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show
the hospitality of the natives of the land.

All in all,
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an
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international
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event
for any
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is a great opportunity which will be advantageous to the
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country
rather
than creating a
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lot
of difficulties.
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IELTS essay Hosting an international sports event can have lots of advantages but it also comes with some disadvantages.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
328 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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