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Advantages & Disadvantages of E-Commerce

The boom in the wide range of business industry has not only been benefitting the people making their lives much comfortable but also has offered an easy way of exchanging goods through internet. Also known as e-commerce. Life through internet has been pleasant and enjoyable running it in the business made distinctive development. On the other hand. Nevertheless it covered some pros and cons in the lives of people, challenging in various fields of business industry through e-commerce which I’m going to state down on some essential facts and points. Business is such a platform that helps in the livelihood of people satisfying an individual not only to their basic needs but also in improvising their lifestyles with luxurious wants, likewise in the development of e-commerce has bought a different level of expectations in exchanging goods and services instantly with the help of internet everywhere. However with the growing in population, people from anywhere accessible to networking and those with much advance in technology along with their ideas had been misleading their strength into creating some fault business websites to simply deceive the innocent customers. For instance a close friend of mine who ordered a phone online with some less price was left with an empty box to her door which was to be expected as she didn’t investigate or check the website properly hence it is essential for the people ordering products online has to go through it or else to not pay unless the products are right on your hands. Despite of touching the hearts of so many people be it within in business or to customers, the strategy of e-commercial business has always proved rightfully in increasing the demand of people’s concern making their lives way much better and easier. In summary, the impact of e-commerce in business indeed fulfilled the desire of people around the world yet to conceal the unwanted & fault business must come to an end or must be strictly disciplined to some extend that it should not happen otherwise.
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has offered an easy way of exchanging
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goods
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through
internet.
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known as
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e-commerce
. Life
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through
internet has been pleasant and enjoyable running it in the
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business
made distinctive development.
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it covered
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some
pros and cons in the
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lives
of
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people
, challenging in various fields of
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business
industry
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through
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e-commerce
which I’m going to state down on
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some
essential facts and points.

Business is such a platform that
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helps
in the livelihood of
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people
satisfying an individual not
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only
to their basic needs
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but
also
in improvising their lifestyles with luxurious wants,
likewise
in the development of
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e-commerce
has
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bought
a
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different
level of expectations in exchanging
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goods
and services
instantly
with the
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help
of internet everywhere.

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However
with the growing in population,
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people
from anywhere accessible to networking and those with much advance in technology along with their
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ideas
had been misleading their strength into creating
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some
fault
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business
websites to
simply
deceive the innocent customers.
For instance
a close friend of mine who ordered a phone online with
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some
less price was
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left
with an empty box to her door which was to be
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expected
as she didn’t investigate or
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check
the website
properly
hence
it is essential for the
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people
ordering products online
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has to
go
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through
it or else to not pay unless the products are right on your hands.
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touching the hearts of
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people
be it within in
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business
or to customers, the strategy of e-commercial
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business
has always proved
rightfully
in increasing the demand of
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people’s
concern making their
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lives
way much better and easier.

In summary, the impact of
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e-commerce
in
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business
indeed
fulfilled the desire of
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people
around the world
yet
to conceal the unwanted & fault
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business
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extend
that it should not happen
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IELTS essay Advantages & Disadvantages of E-Commerce

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
337 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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