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Home schooling for children

satisfactory education is a foundation stone to every child's development. In recent times, educating children at home is becoming preferred option among parents, here will be disused why parents are opting home study and what would be cons and pros. parents tends to prefer home schooling instead of the conventional way due to various reasons. The most prominent reason is that by teaching there children at home they can monitor closely and they an see progress in children where most important would be children home work there extra activity while studying. while parents is responsible to complete children syllabus so they can do more extra study plan so child can be more smart and get higher knowledge as per parent talents.
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education is a foundation stone to every child's development. In recent times, educating
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children
at home is becoming preferred option among
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, here will
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why
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parents
are opting home study and what would be cons and pros.
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parents
tends to prefer
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home schooling
instead
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children
at home they can monitor
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where most
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home work there extra activity while studying.
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while
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parents
is responsible to complete
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syllabus
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they can do more extra study plan
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child can be more smart and
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IELTS essay Home schooling for children

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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