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I write to express my delight I am shifting to Canada for higher studies and you'd like your guidance regarding a part time job ontario next month start my PhD in biochemistry at the University of Toronto it will be of 4 years intend to finish in three years I would like to work part time while pursuing my studies that I can get work experience which as well I part time I will get to learn about Canadian culture and network with people this experience will be helpful to find a full time job after my course you have been living in Canada for past 15 years and I am sure you will having a lot of connections in the Medical Research based I think you will be a great man me in finding a job job job market it will be great to see u soon
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IELTS essay help to search par time job in canada

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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