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The images given describe the alterations which took place at West Park Secondary School since its structural revolution from 1950 to 2010. Exactly during the mid of 20th century, the institution which is along the side of the main road is encircled by houses, farmland, and playground. In 1980 layout, the houses which were earlier in 1950 were replaced by the car park and science block while the farm land is cleared to make it a new sports field. On the decade of the 21st century the enormous amount of space were allotted for the car park with a compromise in area of the sports field and the play ground. In all the three years of the blueprint only the play area for students has been present. Altogether, the school which had all amenities in 1950 was essentially expanded in later stages by occupying the surrounding areas to provide large individual spatial allotment would be given to each block such car parks, research block etc.

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given
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describe
 the alterations which took place at West You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 Secondary School since its structural revolution from 1950 to 2010.

Exactly during the mid of 20th century, the institution which is along the side of the main road is encircled
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
, farmland, and playground. In 1980 layout, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 which were earlier in 1950 were replaced
 by the car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and science block while the farm land is cleared
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it a new sports field. On the decade of the 21st century the enormous amount of space were allotted
 for the car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 with a compromise in area of the sports field and the play ground. In all the three years of the blueprint This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the play area for students has been present.

Altogether, the school which had all amenities in 1950 was essentially
 expanded in later stages by occupying the surrounding areas to provide large individual spatial allotment would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to each block such car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parks
, research block etc. 