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Healthcare should be free for all citizens Irrespective their economical background Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Healthcare should be free for all citizens Irrespective their economical background O1B7
First of all, healthcare is the fundamental right of all individuals so to obtain the maximum attainable physical and mental health. So, irrespective of race, religion, political belief, economic or social condition, every citizen should enjoy the highest attainable standards of health through free health care facilities. For instance, constitution of India has clearly mentioned right to health as one of the basic rights of citizens of India Secondly, diseases do not spare someone based on his/her economical status so all persons from every economic background should get optimal healthcare irrespective of their economic status. Heart lung, any other organ or metabolism related disease are common in both rich and poor person. Even drug or treatment for all these diseases also are same. For example, acitrom is an anticoagulant given to patient with heart related diseases which are prevalent in all economical classes of society Moreover, government is chosen for the purpose of fulfilling its duties towards its people and look after the interest’s people. Health care is one of the duties of government, therefore government should guarantee right to health to every citizen for further illustration, current government of India has started the program named “health For All” as promised by them in the election manifesto of their party to fulfil their commitment.
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First of all
, healthcare is the fundamental
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right
of all individuals
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so
to obtain the maximum attainable physical and mental
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health
.
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So
, irrespective of race, religion, political belief, economic or social condition, every citizen should enjoy the highest attainable standards of
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health
through free
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health
care facilities.
For instance
, constitution of India has
clearly
mentioned
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right
to
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health
as one of the basic
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rights
of citizens of
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India


Secondly
,
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diseases
do not spare someone based on his/her
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economical
status
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so
all persons from every economic background should
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get
optimal healthcare irrespective of their economic status. Heart lung, any other organ or metabolism related
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disease
are common in both rich and poor person. Even drug or treatment for all these
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diseases
also
are same.
For example
,
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acitrom
is an anticoagulant
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given
to patient with heart related
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diseases
which are prevalent in all economical classes of
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society


Moreover
,
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government
is chosen
for the purpose of fulfilling its duties towards its
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people
and look after the interest’s
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people
.
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Health
care is one of the duties of
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government
,
therefore
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government
should guarantee
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right
to
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health
to every citizen for
further
illustration,
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current
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government
of India has
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started
the program named
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“health
For All” as promised by them in the election manifesto of their party to fulfil their commitment.
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IELTS essay Healthcare should be free for all citizens Irrespective their economical background

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
214 words
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