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Health is the gift of God , good health is necessary for human .few people belived that health is a first requirement of human , that's why the medical service should not allowed to private authorities. I think more demerits of private centre rather than merits. I would talk about expensive private sector as well as their facilities.

Health is the gift of God, good health is necessary for human. few people belived that health is a first requirement of human, that's why the medical service should not allowed to private authorities. I think more demerits of private centre rather than merits. I would talk about expensive private sector as well as their facilities. G9dNg
Health is the gift of God, good health is necessary for human. few people belived that health is a first requirement of human, that's why the medical service should not allowed to private authorities. I think more demerits of private centre rather than merits. I would talk about expensive private sector as well as their facilities. I discuss about their disadvantages in my next paragraph. One of the hand, some people think health problems are should not solved by private health care because they think private authorities are more expensive for poor people. Some people which are under the poverty line they can't get these costly aid. For example the state conduct a survey in 2020 in which 60%people died because of lacking medicine. because its very costly and they loss their life
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Health
is the gift of God,
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good
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health
is necessary for human.
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few
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people
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belived
that
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health
is a
first
requirement of human, that's why the medical service should not
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allowed
to
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private
authorities. I
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think
more demerits of
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private
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centre
rather
than merits. I would talk about expensive
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private
sector
as well
as their facilities.
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I
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discuss about their
disadvantages in my
next
paragraph. One of the hand,
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some
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people
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think
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health
problems are should not
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solved
by
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private
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health
care
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because
they
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think
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private
authorities are more expensive for poor
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people
.
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Some
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people
which are under the poverty line they can't
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get
these costly aid.
For example
the state conduct a survey in 2020 in which 60%
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
died
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because
of lacking medicine.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
because
its
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very
costly and they
Did you mean "lost" (past tense of the verb 'lose')?
loss
their
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life

IELTS essay Health is the gift of God, good health is necessary for human. few people belived that health is a first requirement of human, that's why the medical service should not allowed to private authorities. I think more demerits of private centre rather than merits. I would talk about expensive private sector as well as their facilities.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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