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he charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The first chart represents how different world pineapple exports between the top producing countries in the years 2009 and 2019. The second one illustrates how different cost to the consumer for each pineapple in the year 2019. overall, as shown in the graph, the largest country that produced pineapple was country A in the second period of time. While the smallest producing country was C in the first time period. meanwhile, the pie chart depicts that the distribution and retail was the largest cost segment in the study time period. What is clear in the bar chart, in the country A the number of tones jump up in the study time period, while it is shrunk down in country B. in contrast, there is no noticeable difference in country C. With regards to the cost of each pineapple, the largest cost spent on distribution and retail. Profit take 18% of the cost for each pineapple. Export costs only took 4% of the cost of producing each pineapple.

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 to the consumer for each pineapple in the year 2019.

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 of each pineapple, the largest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
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 of producing each pineapple. 