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Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree?

In the contemporary era, It has been thought that Graduating from a reputed university provides to get better employment opportunities. I strongly believe that education is not the only requisite to obtain a good job. This essay will reflect the importance of education as well as the experience and skills knowledge in the respective field. To survive in the globalization era, people want to have higher studies in good colleges and universities which help them to remain in the world competition. The foremost reason for graduating from universities that it provides sound technical knowledge of the subjects. It is undeniable that the universities try to provide learning which can be needed in occupations. To illustrate- Technical Universities are providing all essential training which is mandatory for the engineers's students such as data structuring, algorithms, and programming, etc. Furthermore, Companies consider technical graduates only for technical positions because they have strong knowledge in their respective fields. Besides, university education is the main qualification to get a good job Nevertheless, Knowledge is not enough to acquire the job opportunity in the globalized world. There are several skills which require to work in the company. Companies' managers often search for those people who have presentable skills, excellent communication skills, team Player, intellectual awareness of the corporate environment. For Example- A salesman should have presentable and confident while selling the product or service to the consumer. If the salesmen would not be strong in soft skills, then it may difficult for him to achieve the company's goals. To sum up, university education is important to sustain in the world. However, The skills and experience enhance also plays a key role in the progress.
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thought
that Graduating from a reputed
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university
provides to
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get
better employment opportunities. I
strongly
believe that
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education
is not the
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only
requisite to obtain a
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good
job. This essay will reflect the importance of
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education
as well
as the experience and
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skills
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knowledge
in the respective field.

To survive in the globalization era,
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people
want to have higher studies in
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good
colleges and
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universities
which
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help
them to remain in the world competition. The foremost reason for graduating from
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universities
that it provides sound
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technical
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knowledge
of the subjects. It is undeniable that the
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universities
try to provide learning which can
be needed
in occupations. To illustrate-
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Technical
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Universities
are providing all essential training which is mandatory for the
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engineers's
students such as data structuring, algorithms, and programming, etc.
Furthermore
,
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Companies
consider
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technical
graduates
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only
for
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technical
positions
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because
they have strong
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knowledge
in their respective fields.
Besides
,
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university
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education
is the main qualification to
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get
a
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good
job

Nevertheless
,
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Knowledge
is not
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enough
to acquire the job opportunity in the globalized world. There are several
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skills
which require
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to work
in the
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company
.
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Companies
' managers
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often
search for those
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people
who have presentable
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skills
, excellent communication
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skills
, team Player, intellectual awareness of the corporate environment.
For Example
- A salesman should have presentable and confident while selling the product or service to the consumer. If the salesmen would not be strong in soft
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skills
, then it
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may difficult
for him to achieve the
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company
's goals.

To sum up,
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university
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education
is
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important
to sustain in the world.
However
, The
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skills
and experience enhance
also
plays a key role in the progress.
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IELTS essay Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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