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have you ever forgotten something important?

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Yes, there are many things that I have forgotten, but I think the biggest one was a meeting with my boss. I vividly remember every minute that I spend preparing myself for that meeting but as a multitask person, I had too many irons in the fire at that moment. The meeting day started and I completely forgot that it was like my mind recall it at the last minute. I was in rush to get ready and be at work. When I arrived, I lied and blame my personal life as an excuse. since then I have never forgotten important meetings because I keep this incidence in mind as a lesson and never leave important meetings behind.
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as a multitask person, I had too
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irons in the fire at that moment. The
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and I completely forgot that it was like my mind recall it at the last minute. I was in rush to
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ready and be at work. When I arrived, I lied and blame my personal life as an excuse.
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this incidence in mind as a lesson and never
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IELTS essay have you ever forgotten something important?

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