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Harmful effect of waste to our life

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Waste is causing serious consequences for the living environment and human health. Garbage is threatening natural habitats and coastal ecosystems, increasing the risk of extinction of marine life. Indiscriminate burning of waste also causes the risk of perforating the ozone layer, causing climate change. Pollution of water, soil and air directly affects human health. Garbage left in the air for a long time will pollute the air, causing diseases related to the respiratory and digestive system of humans. Besides, waste also degrade ecosystems and destroys the landscape. In short, waste has been causing extremely serious consequences for the living environment and human health.
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serious consequences for the living environment and
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human
health. Garbage is threatening natural habitats and coastal ecosystems, increasing the
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risk
of extinction of marine life. Indiscriminate burning of
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waste
also
causes the
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risk
of perforating the ozone layer,
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causing
climate
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change
. Pollution of water, soil and air
directly
affects
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human
health. Garbage
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left
in the air for a long time will pollute the air,
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causing
diseases related to the respiratory and digestive system of
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humans
.
Besides
,
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waste
also
degrade ecosystems and
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destroys
the landscape. In short,
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waste
has been
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causing
extremely
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human
health.
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IELTS essay Harmful effect of waste to our life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
103 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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