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group members are not supposed to take in the same score on the project

In contemporary society, there are many criticisms of college education, such as ranking fraud, poor quality of education and so on. Some people believe that all group members are supposed to take in the same score on the project because it is not easy to misunderstand by other people. But from my perspective, I disagree with the statement. First off, I am supposed that it is not fair for some students. In a group project, not everyone makes the same effort. Like some people do very well in school, they will voluntarily take on more tasks than those who have a bad grade. If teachers give the same grade to both of them, students who put in more energy and effort will feel unbalanced and next time they maybe do less things than this project. It is unbenefit to university’s education casue not everyone in campus will have the impetus to get a good result and gain more knowledge. Moreover, many students will have opinions on the school’s policy, if students publishe their idea on the internet, it will have a bad influence on the university’s reputation. For example, last semester, my friend Jackson was devided into a group that every group member is so lazy that they didn’t want to do anything. Thus, all the tasks were left to Jachson, however, Jackson didn’t want ended up with falling grades so he had to stay up late every night to get projects done and made up for school work. But when Jackson saw his grade was same as others in his group, he felt disappointed that professior had seen his effort and did not give him a higher result than others. Secondly, this will have a bad effect on those students who do not have an earnest work on the project. Because they will have a thought that even if they do not have to spend time and do some work, they also can get a good result. This idea will make them have great difficulties in the later semester. In addition to group projects, other courses’ tasks need to be completed by themselves. While they are used to being helped from others, they are going to be lazy and ultimately end up failing to graduate. For instance, my friend Tommy, he always trying to get off work on projects so he did nothing in his group, yet he was lucky that he always get an excellient goal in his project. So now he does not study anything and only plays video games and joins in parties. I am about to graduate while he had to spend more year studying to complete the courses he had failed. Consequently, if professiors could grade each studens according to what they have done, the learning atmosphere in campus will become better than now.
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criticisms of college education, such as ranking fraud, poor quality of education and
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it is not easy to misunderstand by
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other
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from my perspective, I disagree with the statement.

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off, I
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that it is not
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for
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students
. In a
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group
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project
, not everyone
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makes
the same effort. Like
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some
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people
do
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well in school, they will
voluntarily
take on more tasks than those who have a
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bad
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grade
. If teachers give the same
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grade
to both of them,
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students
who put in more energy and effort will feel unbalanced and
next
time they maybe do
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less
things than this
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. It is
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unbenefit
to university’s education
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not everyone in campus will have the impetus to
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a
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good
result and gain more knowledge.
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,
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students
will have opinions on the school’s policy, if
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publishe
their
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idea
on the internet, it will have a
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bad
influence on the university’s reputation.
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, last semester, my friend Jackson was
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into a
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group
that every
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group
member is
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so
lazy that they didn’t want to do anything.
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Jachson
,
however
, Jackson didn’t want ended up with falling
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grades
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so
he had to stay up late every night to
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get
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projects
done and made up for school
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work
.
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But
when Jackson
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saw
his
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was same as others in his
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, he felt disappointed that
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had
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seen
his effort and did not give him a higher result than others.

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effect on those
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students
who do not have an earnest
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work
on the
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project
.
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they will have a
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thought
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have to
spend time and do
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, they
also
can
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a
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good
result. This
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will
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make
them have great difficulties in the later semester.
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to
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projects
,
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other
courses’ tasks need to
be completed
by themselves. While they are
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used
to being
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helped
from others, they are going to be lazy and
ultimately
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end
up failing to graduate.
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, my friend Tommy,
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he
always trying to
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get
off
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work
on
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projects
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so
he did nothing in his
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group
,
yet
he was lucky that he always
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get
an
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excellient
goal in his
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he does not study anything and
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only
plays video games and
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in parties. I am about to graduate while he had to spend more year studying to complete the courses he had failed.

Consequently
, if
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professiors
could
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grade
each
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studens
according to what they have done, the learning atmosphere in campus will become better than
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IELTS essay group members are not supposed to take in the same score on the project

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
470 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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