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Greetings dear everyone, my name is Raghad and I am 20 years old.

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Greetings dear everyone, my name is Raghad and I am 20 years old. when I was 14 years old, I started to drew logos to my friends back in school for group studying, each group has varies logo made by me, I still remember how proud and happy i was. that passion and love of drawing made me develop it into art, graphic design, graphic illustrations, a lot of ideas, and fashion. Greetings dear everyone, my name is Raghad and I am 20 years old. when I was 14 years old, I started to drew logos to my friends back in school for group studying, each group has varies logo made by me, I still remember how proud and happy i was. that passion and love of drawing made me develop it into art, graphic design, graphic illustrations, a lot of ideas, and fashion. Greetings dear everyone, my name is Raghad and I am 20 years old. when I was 14 years old, I started to drew logos to my friends back in school for group studying, each group has varies logo made by me, I still remember how proud and happy i was. that passion and love of drawing made me develop it into art, graphic design, graphic illustrations, a lot of ideas, and fashion.
Greetings dear everyone, my name is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Raghad and
I am 20 years
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old
.
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when
I was 14 years
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old
, I
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started
to drew
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logos
to my friends back in school for
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group
studying, each
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group
has varies
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logo
made by me, I
still
remember how proud and happy
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
that
passion and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
of drawing made me develop it into art, graphic design, graphic illustrations,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
, and fashion. Greetings dear everyone, my name is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Raghad and
I am 20 years
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
old
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
when
I was 14 years
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
old
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to drew
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
logos
to my friends back in school for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
studying, each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
has varies
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
logo
made by me, I
still
remember how proud and happy
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
that
passion and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
of drawing made me develop it into art, graphic design, graphic illustrations,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
, and fashion. Greetings dear everyone, my name is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Raghad and
I am 20 years
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
old
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
when
I was 14 years
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
old
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to drew
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
logos
to my friends back in school for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
studying, each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
has varies
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
logo
made by me, I
still
remember how proud and happy
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
that
passion and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
of drawing made me develop it into art, graphic design, graphic illustrations,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
, and fashion.
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IELTS essay Greetings dear everyone, my name is Raghad and I am 20 years old.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
216 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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