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Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads. NgLm
Transportation is a heart of any countries, Central is also trying to improve transportation system through mega project on railways and roads. However, government should work to developed more railways compared to roads. To measure extent I bolster with the viewpoint. My preference is justified for the year with details and example. Fundamental reason for my opinion is that railways is polluted less. By this I mean that on the roads large number of vehicles cause various type of is issue as a traffic jams, rush in peak hours, and noise. for example during the morning time many people on the roads get stuck due to heavy load of vehicles and also use horn to attain attention of others which cause noise. On the other hand railway is not only avoid nose problem but also cause not traffic jams. Furthermore, railway is a cheap transportation system compared to roads. In other terms, most of people like job holders and student must usually preferred railways which carry large number of people on the single unit. On the other hands, on the roads people choose to alone traveling by the cars. As a result railway is a lessPollute and low cost of transportation system. However, I am not disregard the other aspect that roads is a play a vital role in transported daily essential. In other words in any area in the country not a join railways facilities or not build railways and not possible to transported daily needs like milk, oil, fresh bread, and vegetables. Thus, it is only possible throughout roads from many urban area factories or vegetable market to rural. To some up, it can be stated that government more attention to build railways rather than roads. Because of it is more conventional and numerous advantages although roads are important role play when railway is not available.
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is a heart of any countries, Central is
also
trying to
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improve
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transportation
system through mega project on
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railways
and
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roads
.
However
,
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government
should work to developed more
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railways
compared to
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roads
. To measure extent I bolster with the viewpoint. My preference
is justified
for the year with
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details
and example. Fundamental reason for my opinion is that
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railways
is polluted
less. By this I mean that on the
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roads
large number of vehicles cause various type of is issue as
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a traffic
jams, rush in peak hours, and noise.
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for
example during the morning time
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many
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people
on the
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roads
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get
stuck due to heavy load of vehicles and
also
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use
horn to attain attention of others which cause noise. On the
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other
hand
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railway
is not
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only
avoid nose problem
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but
also
cause not traffic jams.
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,
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railway
is a
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cheap
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transportation
system compared to
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roads
. In
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other
terms, most of
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people
like job holders and student
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must
usually
preferred
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railways
which carry large number of
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people
on the single unit. On the
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other
hands, on the
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roads
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people
choose to alone traveling by the cars.
As a result
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railway
is a
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lessPollute
and low cost of
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transportation
system.

However
, I am not
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disregard
the
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other
aspect that
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roads
is a play a vital role in transported daily essential. In
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other
words in any area in the country not a
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join
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railways
facilities or not build
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railways
and not possible to transported daily needs like milk, oil, fresh bread, and vegetables.
Thus
, it is
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only
possible throughout
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roads
from
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many
urban area factories or vegetable market to rural. To
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some
up, it can
be stated
that
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government
more attention to build
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railways
rather
than
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roads
.
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Because
of it is more conventional and numerous advantages although
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roads
are
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important
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role play
when
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railway
is not available.

IELTS essay Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads.

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  American English
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308 words
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