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governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. with this statement? YLBeK

first of all, government is key of a country. without a government a country cannot be ruled or moved. government is head of a nation who makes rules, regulations and policies for a peoples. in my point of view, yes i think this statement is good because train are faster than vehicle. train can be reliable and seats are more number compared than bus. in train there will be certain stops and time management will be less. secondly, the government should make a proper fare system or pricing because poor people cannot afford it. in different places railways cannot be made problems (like rivers, conservation areas, national parks or hills) and it deals with deforestation. railways can cause a soil erosion in a different places due to sloppy areas. railway can affect a national revenue of a country by cost of infrastructure and number of labors. railway

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first of all
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government
 is key of a country. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWithout
without
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government
 a country cannot be ruled
 or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterGovernment
government
 is head of a nation who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
, regulations and policies for Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a people" or simply "peoples"?a peoplepeoples
a peoples
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 my point of view, yes Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this statement is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 train are faster than vehicle. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTrain
train
 can be reliable and seats are Use only "number" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.number
more number
 compared than bus. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 train there will be certain This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
 and time management will be less. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSecondly
secondly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a proper fare system or pricing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 poor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 cannot afford it. in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 places You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
 cannot be made
 problems (like rivers, conservation areas, national parks or hills) and it deals with deforestation. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterRailways
railways
 can cause a soil erosion in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 places due to sloppy areas. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterRailway
railway
 can affect a national revenue of a country by cost of infrastructure and number of labors. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterRailway
railway