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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. with this statement? 1WJy

Although some people have the opinion that governments should concentrate more of its resources on railways, others oppose it. They believe that in order to save money, roads should be created instead of railways. Before formulating any viewpoint, let us delve into both of these views in the subsequent paragraphs. To begin with, let us shed some light on the opinion that railways should be layed more by the governments. First and foremost, if one has to travel longer distances, railways are better and more comfortable. To continue, railways are safer than roads, as there are less chances of accidents. Moreover, railways are faster means of transportation, whereas on roads vehicles cannot run fast, as that will be dangerous. To illustrate, fastest train runs in Shanghai, China at the speed of 266 mps, which is impossible to achieve on roads.

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