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Governments should spend money on railway rather than roads.to what extend do you agree or disagree to this statement?

Governments should spend money on railway rather than roads. to this statement? 85LNl
It has been suggested that government could expenditure money on railway compared to roads. To a major extent, I firmly differ with the suggested viewpoint. My preference is elaborated further. The fundamental reason to my opinion is that use of roads in daily routine of people. In other words, Students and employees are most use of roads. They are going to everywhere through their vehicle. Everyone are use of roads in their routine life. For example, Every people are not use of railway rather than roads. moreover, most roads are use for transport. For instance, bus, two-vehiler as well as four vehiler are use of roads. Nowadays, People have went everywhere at that time they are most use of roads, Furthermore, Everyone are use of roads in their business. By this i mean say that nowadays many business organized on roads. For instance, someone is open shop of stationary. As a result, They are earn money by shop, which is standing on roads. Therefore, It has many benefits for public through roads. However, I would not disregard the aspect that railway are not use in daily life. Because, Railway are more far from town as well as high rent if travel in the transport. To cap it all, Everyone are not affordable railways. Due to poor people are not affordable these transport. Therefore, Government could not spend more money on railway. To sum up, it can be stated that government can spend money on railway compared to roads. Public are use of roads daily rather than railway; however, railway are not affordable everyone. I believe that government could expenditure on roads.
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been suggested
that
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government
could expenditure
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money
on
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railway
compared to
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roads
. To a major extent, I
firmly
differ with the suggested viewpoint. My preference
is elaborated
further
.

The fundamental reason to my opinion is that
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use
of
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roads
in daily routine of
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people
.
In other words
, Students and employees are most
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use
of
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roads
. They are
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going to everywhere
through their vehicle.
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Everyone
The pronoun 'Everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "is", "was", "were".
are
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use
of
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roads
in their routine life.
For example
, Every
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people
are not
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of
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rather
than
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.
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moreover
, most
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roads
are
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use
for transport.
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, bus,
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two-vehiler
as well
as four
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are
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everywhere at that time they are most
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,
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,
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are
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of
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in their business. By this
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i
mean say that nowadays
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many
business organized on
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roads
.
For instance
, someone is open shop of stationary.
As a result
, They are
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earn
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money
by shop, which is standing on
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roads
.
Therefore
, It has
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many
benefits for public through roads.

However
, I would not disregard the aspect that
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railway
are not
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use
in daily life.
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,
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are more far from town
as well
as high rent if travel in the transport. To cap it all,
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Everyone
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are
not affordable
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railways
. Due to poor
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people
are not affordable these transport.
Therefore
,
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Government
could not spend more
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money
on
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railway
. To sum up, it can
be stated
that
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government
can spend
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money
on
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railway
compared to
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roads
. Public are
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use
of
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roads
daily
rather
than
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railway
;
however
,
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railway
are not affordable
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everyone
. I believe that
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government
could expenditure on
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roads
.
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IELTS essay Governments should spend money on railway rather than roads. to this statement?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
271 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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