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Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Nrlrg
It has been known for some time now that a move towards sources of energy which are not carbon-based is urgently required to stop the effects of global warming. In my view, there are too few governments who seem to be promoting the use of other types of energy such as wind, wave, solar and nuclear sources of energy. Governments at present are too reliant on coil, oil and gas. Although some governments are doing research into the use of alternative energy sources, many are not. Energy from the wind, the sea and the sun does not pollute the environment and is an everlasting source of power. Nuclear power is clean, and although it is not totally unproblematic, it would provide a large amount of energy and dramatically improve the environment. Countries such as France have made good use of nuclear power. My feeling is that more use could be made of wind power. In some countries, there has been a reluctance to use wind turbines, even in areas which are not densely populated, as some people believe they are eyesores. Personally, I believe they are not only useful, but beautiful as well. Governments should spend more time and effort promoting the benefits of this source of energy and trying to make the public understand the reason for change. In conclusion, I believe that, if governments forced everyone to have a wind turbine and solar panels on the building they live in, made more use of wave power and built more nuclear power stations, then they would manage to avert the dangers that are seriously threatening the Earth.
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which are not carbon-based is
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required
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stop
the effects of global warming. In my view, there are too few
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governments
who seem to be
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promoting


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the
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use
of other types of
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energy
such as
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wind
, wave, solar and nuclear
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sources
of energy.

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Governments
at present are too reliant on coil, oil and gas.
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governments
are doing research into
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use
of alternative
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energy
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sources
,
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many
are not.
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from the
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wind
, the sea and the sun does not pollute
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the


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environment
and is an everlasting
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source
of
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power
. Nuclear
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power
is clean, and although it is not
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totally


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unproblematic
, it would provide a large amount of
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energy
and
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the environment. Countries
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such


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as
France have made
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use
of nuclear power.

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could
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of
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power
. In
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some
countries, there has been a reluctance to
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use
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wind


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turbines
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densely
populated, as
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believe they are eyesores.
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promoting


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the
benefits of this
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source
of
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energy
and trying to
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make
the public understand the reason for
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change
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In conclusion
, I believe that, if
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governments
forced everyone to have a
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wind
turbine and solar panels on the building

they
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live
in, made more
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use
of wave
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power
and built more nuclear
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power
stations, then they would manage to avert

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the
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dangers
that are
seriously
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IELTS essay Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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