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Governments in many countries are urgently seeking ways to reduce unemployment in rural areas. What are the most effective ways to do this? Which measure do you think would be the single most effective step that governments could take?

Jobs are declining day by day due to some major factors. Councils in enormous countries taking steps to get more path to stimulate works in undeveloped areas, and villages. I would throw light on all these possibilities and how it could be done. Firstly, the main concern is lack of schools and colleges in that area which leads to an uneducated and not able to get job. Governments should implement on this, and construct education source as much as they can. Even though, it would also assist some people to achieve job in elementary, and secondary schools by being elected as a Teachers, Clerks, Principal, or Cleaners. Moreover, During Construction, work would be covered by person who have no work at all. As an evidence, In India, last year Government built several buildings for study all around backward areas which give positive repercussion by 20% growth of jobs and education as well. Secondly, by setting up an industry will help to maximize the percentage so that people have plenty of an opportunity to get a job easily whilst economic growth would be grown at same time. Government can construct some new gas stations, grocery stores, showrooms, and much more. Furthermore, Loan should be provided by some authorities to encourage youth to run their own business. For example, In Canada, there are many companies who always willing to approve debt on business at low interest rate to set up their own business. To recapitulate, politicians are taking numerous steps to lessen the unemployment percentage for not fully developed areas. It will help the people to grow up in their life.
Jobs
are declining day by day due to
some
major factors. Councils in enormous countries taking steps to
get
more path to stimulate works in undeveloped
areas
, and villages. I would throw light on all these possibilities and how it could
be done
.

Firstly
, the main concern is lack of schools and colleges in that
area
which leads to an uneducated and not able to
get
job
.
Governments
should implement on this, and construct education source as much as they can.
Even though
, it would
also
assist
some
people
to achieve
job
in elementary, and secondary schools by
being elected
as a Teachers, Clerks, Principal, or Cleaners.
Moreover
, During Construction, work would
be covered
by person who have no work at all. As an evidence, In India, last year
Government
built several buildings for study all around backward
areas
which give
positive
repercussion by 20% growth of
jobs
and education
as well
.

Secondly
, by setting up an industry will
help
to maximize the percentage
so
that
people
have
plenty
of an opportunity to
get
a
job
easily
whilst economic growth would
be grown
at same time.
Government
can construct
some
new gas stations, grocery stores, showrooms, and much more.
Furthermore
, Loan should
be provided
by
some
authorities to encourage youth to run their
own
business.
For example
, In Canada, there are
many
companies
who always willing to approve debt on business at low interest rate to set up their
own
business.

To recapitulate, politicians are taking numerous steps to lessen the unemployment percentage for not
fully
developed
areas
. It will
help
the
people
to grow up in their life.
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IELTS essay Governments in many countries are urgently seeking ways to reduce unemployment in rural areas. What are the most effective ways to do this? Which measure do you think would be the single most effective step that governments could take?

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