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Government spending should only e v focus on public services, and it is a waste of money to spend on ART for example painting or music. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Government spending should only e v focus on public services, and it is a waste of money to spend on ART for example painting or music. jRAB8
The authority play important role for country development. It is argued that government spare their funding only for public service such as transport health care and education rather than wasting money on construct artwork. I completely agree with this statement and will discuss some factor which supported my view point in upcoming essay. To comments with, government have been job for improved public transport because public transportation should growth and wealth of a nation. Therefore authorities have spare their money for construct of new road. More our provide good condition train, bus and other public vehicle. as a result of this development they are so reduce the traffic problems such as accident and pollution. For instant Singapore government utilised more money for construct new road, after completion of this road people mostly use public transport rather than on their for government overcome this traffic problemSecondly, regime should give proper importance spending on public health care. People should get proper medical care, inspite of their wealth, gender and any such. It is a basic need of human beings. nowaday not every one can afford the advanced medical care since it is becoming more costly than even before the state should spend their fund on improving public health Care facilities and ensure everyone getting the same without any discrepancies. For example, Australia public health Care facility renowned around the word. Assia people get full healthcare sport from the healthcare system in all their lifetime without paying any money. Because this system provide the free service. In conclusion, it can I clean that all the government around the world should give a prior importance to public service rather than investing or not
The authority
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role for country development. It
is argued
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government
spare their funding
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only
for
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public
service such as transport
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health
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care
and education
rather
than wasting
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money
on construct artwork. I completely
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agree
with this statement and will discuss
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some
factor which supported my view point in upcoming essay. To comments with,
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government
have been job for
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improved
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public
transport
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because
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public
transportation should growth and wealth of a nation.
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authorities have spare their
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money
for construct of new road. More our provide
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good
condition train, bus and other
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public
vehicle.
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as
a result of this development they are
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so
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reduce
the traffic problems such as accident and pollution. For instant Singapore
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government
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more
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money
for construct new road, after completion of this road
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people
mostly
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use
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public
transport
rather
than on their for
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government
overcome this traffic
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problemSecondly
, regime should give proper importance spending on
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public
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health
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care
.
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People
should
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get
proper medical
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care
,
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inspite
of their wealth, gender and any such. It is a basic need of human beings.
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nowaday
not every one can afford the advanced medical
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care
since it is becoming more costly than even
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before
the state should spend their fund on improving
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public
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health
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Care
facilities and ensure everyone getting the same without any discrepancies.
For example
, Australia
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public
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health
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Care
facility renowned around the word.
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Assia
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people
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get
full healthcare sport from the healthcare system in all their lifetime without paying any
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money
.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
this system provide the free service.

In conclusion
, it can I clean that all the
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government
around the world should give a prior importance to
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public
service
rather
than investing or not
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IELTS essay Government spending should only e v focus on public services, and it is a waste of money to spend on ART for example painting or music.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
278 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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