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Government should spend money on rails rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Government should spend money on rails rather than roads. QG83

In recent decades, it is a responsibility of government to decide infrastructure of country which becomes a controversial issue among public across the globe as the transportation is very vital for everyone in the life. I partially with this statement that authorities should spend equal expenditure on rainways and roads which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To embark on, there are plethora of factors that why railways should be designed. On the heart, as everyone know that for long distances, the utilize of rails is much beneficial as compared to roads. Adding to it, masses feel convincnce and relax in trains and took every facility likewise food from different categories, seats, washrooms, electricity and numerous others in a proper way without any difficulty. Besides it, in the trians, there are no any difficulty of rush, fight and also trains took few minutes to reach it's destinations. In another perspective, although, roads are also an efficient way to visit one to another places but it has many losses. On the bottom, there are few issues related to traffic congestion which faced by individuals. Additionally, in the buses, folks have to wait for long hours and it took hours to reach it's destination. Adding more, sometimes, there are no any seat to sit in the buses which leads to stress of public at tha t movement. Besides it, it also affects the pressure of human'mind in light of the fact is that everyone has their own vicycles, so in the traffic they have to face various obstacles related to it. In my prespective, state owners should expand their financial amount equally on both roads and railways owing to the fact that both should have it's own pros and cons. Supervision should reduce traffic by composing new rules and regulations and they should provide facilities to buses and trains which broke down otherwise these will be major reason of incidents and harmful injuries of public on the roads. To sum up, increasing demand of both trains and buses leads to pressure and stress of people because of commuting one to other area merely depend on transportation system as I have mentioned above.

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very
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 with this statement that authorities should spend equal expenditure on Possible spelling mistake found.railwaysrain ways
rainways
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 that for long distances, After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'utilize' is correct. If 'utilize' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
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roads
. Adding to it, masses feel Possible spelling mistake found.convincecontinence
convincnce
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 and took every facility likewise
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different
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trians
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.

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roads
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but
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many
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have to
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to reach it's destination
. Adding more, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
, there are Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
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 any seat to sit in the buses which leads to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
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vicycles
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so
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have to
 face various obstacles related to it.

In my Possible spelling mistake found.perspectiverespectiveprospectivep respective
prespective
, state owners should expand their financial amount equally
 on both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 and railways owing to the fact that both should have Did you mean "its" (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?its
it's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 pros and cons. Supervision should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 traffic by composing new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 and Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).regulations, and
regulations and
 they should provide facilities to buses and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
trains
 which broke down otherwise
 these will be major reason of incidents and harmful injuries of public on the roads.

To sum up, increasing demand of both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
trains
 and buses leads to pressure and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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because
 of commuting one to other area merely
 depend on transportation system as I have mentioned above. 