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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement? yjRP
It is undeniable that reading sources such as books, newspapers, magazines, etc. have become commonly available online at no cost. However, does this mean that people will be able to read everything via the Internet for free? In this essay, I will argue that while ebooks can be fast and convenient, they are no substitutes for physical books. Compared to the past, books have become far more accessible online, often for free. For example, certain books are available free of charge merely by googling, and able to be downloaded on tablets at times. Due to this, more people started preferring reading through their electronic devices to physical copies of books. Furthermore, e-books tend to be updated in an easy method, which typically only requires online editing, unlike how physical books are bound to need relatively more time-consuming update processes. On the other hand, if the usage of reading resources online becomes so prevalent that it ends up fully overtaking paperbacks, it surely will cause a number of substantial negative effects. To illustrate, consider too many books being released online, possibly by someone who had bought a number of books themselves. This will often lead the book publishing industry to collapse as it will struggle to get paid for their works. Consequently, it can be considered against the law to pirate books through the Internet and enable anyone to read them without paying. Moreover, whereas electronic devices often have other applications installed on them, physical books don’t. This can mean that printed books are more effective in concentrating while reading than digital books are. In conclusion, I strongly disagree that people will no longer purchase physical books in the future. Although it is true that digital versions of books or magazines allow us to access books easily, I certainly believe that we all have to pay for things and not everything is free in this world.
It is undeniable that
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reading
sources such as
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books
, newspapers, magazines, etc. have become
commonly
available
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online
at no cost.
However
, does this mean that
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people
will be able to read everything via the Internet for
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free
? In this essay, I will argue that while
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ebooks
can be
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fast
and convenient, they are no substitutes for
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physical
books.

Compared to the past,
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books
have become far more accessible
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online
,
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often
for
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free
.
For example
, certain
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books
are available
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free
of charge
merely
by googling, and able to
be downloaded
on tablets at times. Due to this, more
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people
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started
preferring
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reading
through their electronic devices to
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physical
copies of
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books
.
Furthermore
, e-books tend to
be updated
in an easy method, which
typically
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only
requires
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online
editing, unlike how
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physical
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books
are bound
to need
relatively
more time-consuming update processes.

On the other hand
, if the usage of
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reading
resources
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online
becomes
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so
prevalent that it ends up
fully
overtaking paperbacks, it
surely
will cause a number of substantial
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negative
effects. To illustrate, consider too
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many
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books
being released
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online
,
possibly
by someone who had
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bought
a number of
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books
themselves. This will
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often
lead the
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book
publishing industry to collapse as it will struggle to
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get
paid for their works.
Consequently
, it can
be considered
against the law to pirate
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books
through the Internet and enable anyone to read them without paying.
Moreover
, whereas electronic devices
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often
have other applications installed on them,
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physical
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books
don’t. This can mean that printed
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books
are more effective in concentrating while
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reading
than digital
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books
are.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
disagree that
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people
will no longer
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purchase
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physical
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books
in the future. Although it is true that digital versions of
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books
or magazines
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allow
us to access
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books
easily
, I
certainly
believe that we all
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have to
pay for things and not everything is
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free
in this world.

IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
315 words
6.0
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