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Goverenments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.2

Goverenments should spend money on railways rather than roads. with this statement? v. 2
It is considerable matter that in present time government should pay more money to build railways rather than roads. In my point of view if authority expends more money on railways, it helps us to reduce pollution and traffic jam and have a sound environment. I agree with statement. On one hand, although building railway is more expensive, it assists people to communicate with other people to go one place to another place safely. That means, this form is safe and less accident and traffic jam, people may be reach their destination with in short time. people can travel long distance by train without being more exhausted. For example, railways can carry huge of passengers and enormous of goods at a time as well as it keeps us free from several sorts of pollution like air pollution and environmental pollution. Needless to say, by travelling train people are getting more relax and convenient to develop a country' s economy and encourage people more travel train save the people from accident. Moreover, it is recognized that if government build more railways road it helps people to save their money because, travelling train have not pay more money it is more less expensive than other transportation in the world, that is why people show more interest to travel by train and consequently, government needs to spend more money to enthusiasm to use train. For instance, In the develop country' s like United states, UK CANADA those country' s people travel by using train also it gives them comfortable and feel less tried as well as faster and standard. On the other hand, despite of huge benefit of railways some people disagree with this statement for reasons. First of all, public transport is easy and more available to get but railway is not possible to stop in front people home. Finally, for building railways road need more money and have to concern administration people and so on. I personally feel that government should spend money on constructing railways to make country rich economically. Therefore, government should spend money on railways than other forms.
It is considerable matter that in present time
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government
should pay more
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money
to build
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railways
rather
than roads. In my point of view if authority expends more
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money
on
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railways
, it
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helps
us to
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reduce
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pollution
and traffic jam and have a sound environment. I
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agree
with statement.

On one hand, although building
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railway
is more expensive, it assists
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people
to communicate with
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other
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people
to go one place to another place
safely
. That means, this form is safe and less accident and traffic jam,
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people
may be reach their destination with in short time.
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people
can
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travel
long distance by
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train
without being more exhausted.
For example
,
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railways
can carry huge of passengers and enormous of
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goods
at a time
as well
as it
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keeps
us free from several sorts of
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pollution
like air
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pollution
and environmental
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pollution
. Needless to say, by travelling
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train
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people
are getting more relax and convenient to develop a
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country&
#039; s economy and encourage
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people
more
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travel
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train
save the
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people
from accident.

Moreover
, it
is recognized
that if
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government
build more
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railways
road it
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helps
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people
to save their
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money
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because
, travelling
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train
have not pay more
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money
it is
Use only "less" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more less
expensive than
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other
transportation in the world,
that is
why
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people
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show
more interest to
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travel
by
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train
and
consequently
,
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government
needs to spend more
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money
to enthusiasm to
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use
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train
.
For instance
, In
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the develop
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#039; s like
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United states
, UK CANADA those
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people
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travel
by using
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train
also
it gives them comfortable and feel less tried
as well
as faster and standard.

On the
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other
hand,
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despite of
huge benefit of
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railways
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some
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people
disagree with this statement for reasons.
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First of all
, public transport is easy and more available to
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get
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but
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railway
is not possible to
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stop
in front
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people
home.
Finally
, for building
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railways
road need more
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money
and
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have to
concern administration
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people
and
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so
on.

I
personally
feel that
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government
should spend
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money
on constructing
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railways
to
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make
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country
rich
economically
.
Therefore
,
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government
should spend
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money
on
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railways
than
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other
forms.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
59Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS essay Goverenments should spend money on railways rather than roads. with this statement? v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
350 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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