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Nowadays,more and more people use credit cards.It seems that cash and coins will be replaced by credit cards in the future.Is this a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays, more and more people use credit cards. It seems that cash and coins will be replaced by credit cards in the future. Is this a positive or negative trend? 96N07
In this current scenario, majority of individuals prefer to use plastic cards. It is likely that traditional money will be replaced by credit cards in the future. This is a constructvie trend and I will articulate my viewpoints regarding this in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, the reason that why it is considered positive development is that plastic cards are safe and secure form of money. To explicate it, people can carry credit cards easily in their wallets. There are less chances of theft. People can not carry much amonut of money safely in their pockets. As a consequence, credit cards are portable. Additionally, people can easily make transactions. Onaly a credit card pin and number is needed to make payment via credit cards, which is only known to the user, without this no one can use others money. That’s why, it is recommended by bank to all users to keep pin secret. Furthermore, quick way to make transactions. To elucidate it, people have not to stand in long queues in banks and wait for money. To epitome, a person have to go to same bank for money in which his/her account is available. Thus, by using modern money people can easily withdraw cash from ATM of any place. Moreover, no one can use others none. As credit cards are operated by using secret password. Anyhow, if credit card get lost or stolen by someone, so person have not to worry to much. Police can easily detect the card by using its number or a person can block his/her card by informing to the bank. Apart from it, caredit cards work as a proof under some situations. People can use it to represent their identity. To recapitulate, due to advancement of technology and certain advantages of credit cards, people prefer to use credit cards. In future, traditional money will ne replaced by modern cards. It is a positive development as it cast good impact on living standard of people to large extent.
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majority of
individuals prefer to
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use
plastic
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cards
. It is likely that traditional
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money
will
be replaced
by
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credit
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cards
in the future. This is a
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trend and I will articulate my viewpoints regarding this in forthcoming paragraphs.

To commence with, the reason that why it
is considered
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positive
development is that plastic
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cards
are safe and secure form of
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money
. To explicate it,
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people
can carry
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credit
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cards
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easily
in their wallets. There are
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less
chances of theft.
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People
can not carry much
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amonut
of
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money
safely
in their pockets. As a consequence,
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credit
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cards
are portable.
Additionally
,
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people
can
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easily
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make
transactions.
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Onaly
a
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credit
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card
pin and number
is needed
to
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make
payment via
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credit
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cards
, which is
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only
known to the user, without this no one can
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use
others
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money
. That’s why, it
is recommended
by
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bank
to all users to
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keep
pin secret.

Furthermore
, quick way to
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make
transactions. To elucidate it,
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people
have not to stand in long queues in
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banks
and wait for
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money
. To epitome, a person
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have to
go to same
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bank
for
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money
in which his/her account is available.
Thus
, by using modern
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money
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people
can
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easily
withdraw cash from ATM of any place.
Moreover
, no one can
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use
others none.
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As
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credit
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cards
are operated
by using secret password. Anyhow, if
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credit
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card
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lost or stolen by someone,
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so
person have not to worry
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to
much. Police can
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easily
detect the
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card
by using its number or a person can block his/her
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card
by informing to the
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bank
. Apart from it,
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caredit
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cards
work as a proof under
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some
situations.
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People
can
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use
it to represent their identity.

To recapitulate, due to advancement of technology and certain advantages of
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credit
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cards
,
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people
prefer to
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use
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credit
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cards
.
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In future
, traditional
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money
will
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replaced by modern
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cards
. It is a
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positive
development as it cast
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good
impact on living standard of
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people
to large extent.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, more and more people use credit cards. It seems that cash and coins will be replaced by credit cards in the future. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
332 words
5.5
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